Television advertising directed toward young children
(aged two to five) should not be allowed.
The Statement issued about being to see how can we resopond Television advertising directed toward young children(aged two to five)should allowed or not.
The fact is that we're all automatically exposed Advertisement on TV so that we can't controll untill we turn off the civitiation. This is encountered everypeople
who are thinking that even i'm not. So, these effet are not controllable and i wolud like to say agree about Statement.
OKay, on the other hand Advertisement have big good effet for finding a new product from mom and father, espcially they do not have time to spend finding a product
for a baby.THis will be benefit for time efficicent.Thus, they could have finded too hard to get product, cause of usaually outside have no source, well for example
a MAGAZINE from some store, DO you think they will provide infomation for taketing baby? NOo they don't need it. so what i know for them it's hard to find source.
And also some good Ads recommend good education their kid, for example, TOYs that are worth than the other toy, because that uses the kid's creation blahbalh,
and help what baby will be contact and memorize something else. But especially TV is not for baby,for example, when i was kid, i really admire my cartoon and i already had
seen so many ads from cartoon channal. But i don't like them from the channal.Which mean the ads tarket for their parents. Because they have money.
Moreover, some bad company being show the badd attracting ADS based on money, for example, They advertise Card that is showing the authourity ,high hand something else.
Card that is looks simple but it's going to be attracting kid for gaming, showing other people what they have thing that is more effective
The card get someone who is get more powerful card, going to be win. What i want to say, that will become addicted from the money game. This is using dopamin from their
young age which mean they lose their controll on thier young age. That's really weird thing.
Again, TV ADS directed toward young children should not be allowed.Thus they espcially not good at tarketing for kid. just usually their mom and father.And sometimes
they had show spontanous thing that is really bad for young age.So Some good ads are really helpful for their parents, but ultimately company based on the money not uses
good purpose.Then agian
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 80, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... exposed Advertisement on TV so that we cant controll untill we turn off the civitia...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...tiation. This is encountered everypeople who are thinking that even im not. So, t...
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Suggestion: Thus
...His will be benefit for time efficicent.Thus, they could have finded too hard to get...
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Suggestion: don't
... infomation for taketing baby? NOo they dont need it. so what i know for them its ha...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...ng baby? NOo they dont need it. so what i know for them its hard to find source. ...
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Message: Did you mean 'worse', the comparative of 'bad'?
Suggestion: worse
...n their kid, for example, TOYs that are worth than the other toy, because that uses t...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'kids'' or 'kid's'?
Suggestion: kids'; kid's
...an the other toy, because that uses the kids creation blahbalh, and help what baby...
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... else. But especially TV is not for baby,for example, when i was kid, i really admir...
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...ly TV is not for baby,for example, when i was kid, i really admire my cartoon and...
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Suggestion: don't
...so many ads from cartoon channal. But i dont like them from the channal.Which mean t...
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.... But i dont like them from the channal.Which mean the ads tarket for their parents. ...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... mean the ads tarket for their parents. Because they have money. Moreover, some bad c...
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Suggestion: ,
...tise Card that is showing the authourity ,high hand something else. Card that is...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
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...g else. Card that is looks simple but its going to be attracting kid for gaming, ...
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...re powerful card, going to be win. What i want to say, that will become addicted ...
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...lose their controll on thier young age. Thats really weird thing. Again, TV ADS di...
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Suggestion: Thus
...rd young children should not be allowed.Thus they espcially not good at tarketing fo...
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Suggestion: Thus,
...rd young children should not be allowed.Thus they espcially not good at tarketing fo...
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...spcially not good at tarketing for kid. just usually their mom and father.And someti...
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... kid. just usually their mom and father.And sometimes they had show spontanous thi...
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Suggestion: So
... thing that is really bad for young age.So Some good ads are really helpful for th...
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...tely company based on the money not uses good purpose.Then agian
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Suggestion: Then
...ed on the money not uses good purpose.Then agian
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, moreover, really, so, then, thus, well, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82962962963 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5125880309 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535802469136 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 96.4609720861 48.9658058833 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.666666667 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.53405017921 353% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 5.5376344086 415% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167696613026 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565165637834 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992916630456 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.065022352643 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0973447091898 0.0645574589148 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.