Television advertising directed toward young children aged two to five should not be allowed

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Television advertising directed toward young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed.

Advertisements are the essential factor to sell the product in the world market and there are negative and positive consequences of it. Advertise company are filming unique concept to catch the eye of people towards the product. Moreover they are making advertisement to the toddlers who are under five years to sell babies' product. I am not concurred with the idea of broadcasting advertisement which are directly related to the children between two to five because of their false guidance in the name of selling their things. I firmly believe that government should band the advertise that are mainly focusing their intention to sell their product by manipulating children and their parents to purchase them and make strict rule on it.

To begin with, marketing agencies are compelling toddlers to believe in advertising what they are showing and force their parents to buy it though they are not healthy, safe and more expensive. When children see the ads in a cartoon form, it influence them to have the materials though, it's not necessary for them. Moreover these type of ads which are in the video form or bulletin, directly effect the psychological development of the babies. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. Before ten years ago, when my brother was four years, he saw an advertisement in television about a decorated magic stick. The message was that whoever use this stick, they can be superman and fly in the sky. on the contrary, it was not true but it was really hard to convince him. The stick had sharp point in the top which was dangerous for children to play with it so I decided not to buy it. When I did not purchase it for him, for more them five days, he talked about this stick in his dream.

Secondly, Parents are also manipulated by advertising style of company. Unknowingly, they believe what they see without any study about the product and purchase. For example, junk foods are more consumed for children and parents believe they are neutrinos. But they do not care about caffeine, gluten and other chemical which are really harmful for children for their holistic development.

Finally, people purchase abundant unnecessary things for their children though they do not need them. They only buy it just to try their effectiveness and they like the advertisement. These type of advertisement do not care about the costumers but only determine to sell their goods by misguiding people. Parents shop only to make their children happy by fulfilling their desire what they have seen in the advertisement instead of what they really need.

To light of the above mentioned reasons, it's really not worthy to make advertisement targeting to the children who are at the age of their pick holistic development and adoptive. Most of the advertisement are misguiding and manipulating the parents and their children in the name of competitive market . Government should be strict in this matter to control the advertisement trend that is flourishing and following the trend of making advertisement without concerning about the people and their age.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
... the eye of people towards the product. Moreover they are making advertisement to the to...
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Line 1, column 574, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...mly believe that government should band the advertise that are mainly focusing their intentio...
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Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'influences'?
Suggestion: influences
...ldren see the ads in a cartoon form, it influence them to have the materials though, its ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...als though, its not necessary for them. Moreover these type of ads which are in the vide...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...hey can be superman and fly in the sky. on the contrary, it was not true but it wa...
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Line 9, column 42, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...o light of the above mentioned reasons, its really not worthy to make advertisement...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ildren in the name of competitive market . Government should be strict in this mat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, for example, on the contrary, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2623.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 526.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98669201521 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78901763229 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78941899304 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458174904943 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 817.2 618.680645161 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8516047356 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.92 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.04 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.12 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200151286317 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589849388791 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472212359248 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120695316642 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679733437343 0.0645574589148 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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