Television is one of the most famous and effective inventions of our era, and millions of people worldwide are the television's preeminent contact. Adults, youth, teenagers, and children spend their leisure time by that, so this is a crucial issue that everyone should be able to select the program that they want. Seeing that aforementioned, I cannot entirely agree with advertising directed toward young children. There are several reasons why I feel this way that I will explore in the following essay.
Primarily, children are impressed easily by advertisements that may expose them to mental and physical suffering. Moreover, children's self-esteem, capacity to imagine, and personal identity will improve from two to five years of age, while advertisements indicate unreal situations. For instance, advertising shows that children live in perfect and undefective situations that it has contradicted by actual life events.
In addition, I am off in the opinion that children are not mature enough to decide for themselves because they are not intellectually developed while companies force them to see advertising, which is a kind of exploitation. The advertising companies should revere their audience because children are not individuals who decide to select the products. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. When I was a child, I wanted to watch cartoons, while Advertisements delayed watching cartoons.
Furthermore, children demand to have every toy they have seen advertised, and parents have to pay money for that; in addition, sometimes families can not afford to buy, which causes the burden of this falls on parents. For instance, my younger sister wanted everything that she saw, and she was imposing on my parents to buy.
In a nutshell, in my opinion, advertisement is a known method to gain economic benefits for companies, and the economic benefits will have certainly enjoyed by advertising companies. Nevertheless, I think this is unfair that we force young children to watch an advertisement to achieve our economic aims. As a result, advertising toward below five-year-old kids should be outlawed even if it's not possible or controlled.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, while, for instance, i feel, i think, in addition, kind of, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38888888889 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1151221231 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59649122807 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.888011693 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.1875 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.45110844103 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259863763111 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845214539091 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684176531425 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134937873412 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688273081193 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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