Television advertising directed toward young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed.
I agree to the statement that television advertising directed toward young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed. television is a great source of entertainment for children aged between two to five. It has both good and bad effects. but here I would like to talk on how the television advertisements have impacted on young children. There are number of reasons in support of my view:
First, among the kinds of support that might be developed in favor of banning such advertising might be that young children do not have the ability to tell what is good for them and what is not. I would like to support this by giving an example of my nephew who is five years old and likes watching television a lot. One day he saw an advertisement that by wearing that jacket a person can fly which is not true and he tried doing that stunt on his room window. so advertisements on television have direct effect on children. The children don’t know how to react to these advertisements and just do what the advertisement says.
Secondly, advertisement industry just wants to sell their product. they are just selling their products. they show different kind of advertisements to attract the children so that children then demand those items from their parents. young children always get attracted to these fancy advertisements for example if they see toys on television and would demand every toy that they have seen on television.
Last but not the least, television advertising has excessively influenced young children and form lot of bad eating habits in them. advertisement of all kinds of junk food like Maggie noodles, burgers etc that can lead to many health problems in children at this young age.
In the end, I strongly feel that not only the government or the television station should ban the advertisement directed at young children but also parents should keep an eye on their children and decide what their children should see and what should not.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86646884273 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79569319951 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510385756677 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6507299227 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0625 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.521827022429 0.236089414692 221% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185480349612 0.076458572812 243% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.199712982044 0.0737576698707 271% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.311221944051 0.150856017488 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.174056652564 0.0645574589148 270% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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