Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer,

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer,

Extended families like our aunts, uncles and cousins are important part of our life. They help, love and support us in every phase of life. The negative part is that in today’s fast pacing world, relationships are less strong. I agree with the above statement that extended families are less important to us than in the past due to nuclear families, busy schedules, and social network.

Due to job and work opportunities outside the native town more nuclear families are getting created. Nuclear families involve living separately and far away from our close relatives. Living far from near and dear ones disconnects individual from its native society and eventually with time extended families become less important for a person. For instance, most of the young generation today is living outside in big cities leaving their native village behind.

Secondly, because of fast pacing world, people are busy in their day to day jobs. They have less time now to pay visit to their relatives. No contact, for a long time leads to nimble relationship. People don’t interfere in each other’s life much. This behavior is now prevalent across the society which isolates people from one another.
At last, social network and phones also play a crucial part in making extended families less important as it is more convenient for public to ping on mobile phone or texting over social media. No face to face conversations leads to less empathetic relationship. Artificial means of communication results in absence of natural touch of feelings and emotions.

Summarizing, the above points I would like to conclude that extended families though form a crucial part of life are less important for us today. Individual need to find time for their near and dear ones, take their blessings a, help them, and love them to build a positive and empathetic relationships.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 227, Rule ID: THE_PUNCT[1]
Message: Did you forget something after 'a'?
...ear and dear ones, take their blessings a, help them, and love them to build a pos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, secondly, so, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13725490196 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71992818153 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549019607843 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2946354092 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3333333333 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 5.45110844103 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198295957348 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607415376077 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763263142757 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113538289082 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0914073469685 0.0645574589148 142% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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