Should a city try to preserve its old, historic buildings or destroy them and replace them with modern buildings? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion
historic buildings are heritage of a city, it resembles roots and nature of the place. In form of monuments, palaces and gardens they present a beautiful past. I believe that city should keep its old, historic buildings because of myriad of reasons like tourism, knowledge, culture etc.
One of the most important reasons is that it brings tourism. people from other places prefers to visit historical buildings, makes city popular. tourism brings employment opportunities to local people and growth of that particular region.For instance, huge influx of tourist to see taj mahal increased the livelihood of city by construction of hotels, restaurants and travel companies.
preserving old buildings helps to preserve knowledge of ancestors. For instance, techniques they used to build monuments can be used today in mordern architectures. For Example, the style of carving done in taj mahal is used by modern architects to give royal look to the building.
preserving ol
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... to give royal look to the building. preserving ol
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 43.0788530466 21% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 1977.66487455 42% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 153.0 407.700716846 38% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41176470588 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 4.48103885553 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92833799256 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 212.727598566 49% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.686274509804 0.524837075471 131% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 618.680645161 41% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.5392783824 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256613815277 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964684920223 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768881060169 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159565601636 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715288642749 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.01818996416 123% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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