there is no reason why you should act impolite or rude explain your opinion

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...a lot by people in most life situation. if i have been adked such a question, the ...
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Line 1, column 193, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
... will be 'I agree'. I believe most of people unless all of them are same as my opini...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 254, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... all of them are same as my opinion and i will explain my point of view in the fo...
^
Line 2, column 65, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...l religions and societies teach us this a s one of life rule as many other rule ...
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Line 2, column 85, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eties teach us this a s one of life rule as many other rule like honesty, faithfu...
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Line 2, column 134, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
... other rule like honesty, faithfulness, and etc...Politness is one of the most valuable ...
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Line 2, column 143, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Politness
...e like honesty, faithfulness, and etc...Politness is one of the most valuable role in lif...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 305, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun trouble seems to be countable; consider using: 'many troubles'.
Suggestion: many troubles
...nd, impolite person will get himself in many trouble as he will make friends with the same e...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 414, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... experience as an example of this, when i was teenager i use to not listen to my ...
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Line 2, column 429, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...an example of this, when i was teenager i use to not listen to my parents notific...
^
Line 2, column 518, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... be polite at home as well as in public i was keep answer my mom in a rude way an...
^
Line 2, column 543, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a rude way" with adverb for "rude"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...l as in public i was keep answer my mom in a rude way and tell her to 'shut her mouth&ap...
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Line 2, column 637, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...s;whenever ask me to do somthing that i didnt like to do it and my voice always loude...
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Line 2, column 694, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: During
...it and my voice always louder than her. during one of school i answer the same way i u...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 715, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...s louder than her. during one of school i answer the same way i use to answer her...
^
Line 2, column 737, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ing one of school i answer the same way i use to answer her which give a negative...
^
Line 2, column 739, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...g one of school i answer the same way i use to answer her which give a negative imp...
^^^
Line 2, column 967, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...tion that in her report about my ethics.I felt its no reason to act in such ay. ...
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Line 2, column 974, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...at in her report about my ethics.I felt its no reason to act in such ay. In addit...
^^^
Line 2, column 997, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...my ethics.I felt its no reason to act in such ay. In addition, control emotion ...
^^
Line 3, column 29, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... such ay. In addition, control emotion even in difficult and hard situation sho...
^^
Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this situation' or 'these situations'?
Suggestion: this situation; these situations
...hould be owned as no need to be rude in these situation like ife difficulties, test day, and ev...
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Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...test day, and even if facing bad people.I belive we can change the others manner ...
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Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: PRP_RB_NO_VB[1]
Message: Are you missing a verb?
...st day, and even if facing bad people.I belive we can change the others manner if we resp...
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Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...g bad people.I belive we can change the others manner if we respect them and be polite...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: My
...manner if we respect them and be polite.My father is a good example of this. My fa...
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Line 3, column 348, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'faces'.
Suggestion: faces
...is a lawyer and according to his job he facing many rude people and impolite because t...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 472, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...her alwayes listen to them and he never get mad because the bad words he may be hea...
^^^
Line 4, column 250, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'thing'?
Suggestion: thing
...hics and control emotion is such a wise things to be done. I recommend that ethics sho...
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Line 4, column 303, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'valued'?
Suggestion: valued
...done. I recommend that ethics should be value by nations and should keep learn our ch...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, well, in addition, of course, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 76.0 43.0788530466 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1924.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 447.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30425055928 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54768691694 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478747203579 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 629.1 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.1344086022 184% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 129.607634377 48.9658058833 265% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 160.333333333 100.406767564 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.25 20.6045352989 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.5376344086 542% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120503175725 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505384836765 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354691845712 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0827909927173 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300598443749 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 11.7677419355 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.25 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.0537634409 167% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.247311828 166% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.