Glass is a favored building material for modern architecture, yet it is also very dangerous for wild birds. Because they often cannot distinguish between glass and open air, millions of birds are harmed every year when they try to fly through glass windows. There are, however, several solutions that responsible businesses can use to prevent injuries to birds. One-Way Glass One solution is to replace the regular, clear glass with one-way glass that is transparent in only one direction. The occupants of the building can see out, but birds and others cannot see in. If birds cannot see through a window, they will understand that the glass forms a solid barrier and will not try to fly through it. Colorful Designs A second solution is to paint colorful lines or other designs on regular window glass. For example, a window could have a design of thin stripes painted over the glass. People would still be able to see through the openings in the design where there is no paint, while birds would see the stripes and thus avoid trying to fly through the glass. Architects can be encouraged to include colorful painted patterns on glass as part of the general design of buildings. Magnetic Field The third solution is to create an artificial magnetic field to guide birds away from buildings. Humans use an instrument called a magnetic compass to determine directions - either north, south, east, or west. Bird research has shown that birds have a natural ability to sense Earth’s magnetic fields; this ability works just like a compass, and it helps birds navigate in the right direction when they fly. A building in a bird flight path can be equipped with powerful electromagnets that emit magnetic signals that steer birds in a direction away from the building.
The reading and the lecture both discuss the possibility to bird's injured if they hit the glass windows. The reading states that there are many solutions which will prevent this from happened. While the lecture refutes that solutions ans mention they are not will effectively stop birds from injury.
First of all, the reading says one of the solutions is to replace the regular glass which is transparent from both sides by one way glass which transparent only from inside the building, therefore the birds can't see and will not pass through it. However, the lecture argues that reason by replace the one way glass not effective because glass will reflect the objects like a mirror and birds will not understand that. Furthermore, the reflection of sky or trees will encourage the birds to pass through them.
In addition, the reading claims that colorful glass will help to prevent this issue too. The lecturer adds that thin strips done by architucturer to the design of the windows and as people will still can see through this design but on the other hands, the birds they will not try to pass through these strips. The lecture refutes this reason by stating that if the opening is large still the birds try to go through it because its like a hall. Moreover, if the designer make these strips smaller it will affect the lightnings of the building and become dark from inside.
Lastly, the reading argues that use of electromagnets that emit magnetic signals will prevent the birds from reaching these buildings because will be afraid as birds use the magnetic field of earth for their navigation and direct them for their proper destinations.
The lecture refutes this point by mention that even its true that birds use mangnetic field for navigation but only when travel for a long distance not for nearer one' from city to city they will not use these navigation but depend on their eyes and lights to find their ways.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... which will prevent this from happened. While the lecture refutes that solutions ans ...
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Line 1, column 225, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'solutions'' or 'solution's'?
Suggestion: solutions'; solution's
...appened. While the lecture refutes that solutions ans mention they are not will effective...
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Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...nside the building, therefore the birds cant see and will not pass through it. Howev...
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Line 7, column 205, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this navigation' or 'these navigations'?
Suggestion: this navigation; these navigations
...one from city to city they will not use these navigation but depend on their eyes and lights to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, lastly, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, in addition, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 5.04856512141 277% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 22.412803532 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1373.03311258 117% => OK
No of words: 333.0 270.72406181 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80780780781 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30331700667 2.5805825403 89% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 145.348785872 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456456456456 0.540411800872 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.0 419.366225166 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.843674652 49.2860985944 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.416666667 110.228320801 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.75 21.698381199 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06452816374 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20317920887 0.272083759551 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869657390268 0.0996497079465 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447313031648 0.0662205650399 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122877961191 0.162205337803 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0174903035429 0.0443174109184 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.3589403974 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.2367328918 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.42419426049 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 63.6247240618 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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