there is no reasons to be impolite. do you agree or disagree?
People depending on the situations which they experience show different behaviors. Some people think that they need to be impolite in some conditions in order to be satisfied with the situation. However, others, standing on the other side of the continuum, believe that there is no reason to be impolite in any situation. I, personally, concur with the latter group for two conspicuous reasons that I will elaborate on which in the future paragraphs.
To begin with, people behave impolitely and inappropriately when they feel they cannot meet their needs by respecting the other ones. To be more specific, if people behave politely and they see other people do not fulfill their expectations, they turn to be impolite because they think in this way others may pay more attention to them and solve their problem. Nevertheless, psychologically speaking, when people observe that someone is impolite they do not be reluctant to do anything for that person anymore. In such a situation, even people avoid talking with impolite one in order to make him aware of the consequences of his bad behavior. A personal example can drive this notion home. Once, I was in an office to do some official tasks. The office was very crowded and people had to wait for hours so as to get their jobs done. One man got angry and started to talk with the staff impolitely. Not only does not the officer pay attention to him but also they rejected the man’s proposal and refused him. Had not the man behaved inappropriately, his works would have been done smoothly.
Second, some people want to get rid of their bad emotions and pressure by behaving impolitely. In fact, these people use defensive words in order to alleviate their anxiety unfortunately, they are not cognizant of the newest psychological methods which doctors recommend to control anxiety. When individuals behave impolitely they hurt their friends and family members, and it makes them sole gradually because others do not want to be damaged anymore. Although they reduce the pressure and reach kind of calm through their reaction, they destroy their relationships forever. Therefore, people who cannot control themselves in bad condition should take help from a psychologist to solve their personality’s weakness. In this vein, they find that many logical approaches help them to avoid being impolite for example breathing technics, or numbering, and many other useful ways that they can utilize.
In conclusion, taking the two mentioned reasons into account, I do believe that people do not have convincing reasons to be impolite. Because not only they cannot desire their favorite when they behave inappropriately, but they also have much better choices to alleviate their anxiety.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nal example can drive this notion home. Once, I was in an office to do some official...
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Suggestion: to
...rowded and people had to wait for hours so as to get their jobs done. One man got angry ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, as to, for example, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2296.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 448.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.125 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81802179041 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524553571429 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 728.1 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2674068112 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.363636364 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3636363636 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176220780832 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625424726775 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819525054904 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137808589218 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489597883011 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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