TOP 29. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors.
Teachers are one of the most important groups of the society because they grow up next generations. Among them, the university professors have significant state since they teach the practical issues in science and technology. Now, There is a discussion on the salary of the professor, whether increasing it enhance the quality of education or not. In my way of thinking for improving the quality of education, it is necessary to increase the university professor's salary because not only does it help them to have a better focus on their duty, but also it increases the expects from them.
The first reason which should be stated here is that increasing the professor's salary helps them to do their job better. All people work for providing their life needs. The more money the person earns, the better wealthy life. If people do not get enough money, the financial problems will involve most of their concerns, so they will not be able to do their duty well. Increasing the spent money on salaries of professors result in the reduction of their financial conflicts. It helps them to focus on their responsibilities as a university teacher, and allocate more time for the students. Also. they will be able to fund some practical projects in the university to progress the research. Generally, it enhances the quality of the education in the university.
The other point which deserves some words here is that increasing salary leads to increasing expectations. People usually work as much as they paid. A person in a job position will work harder if he gets more money. In addition, the employer's expectation will increase if he allocates more money to the worker. Spending more money on the professor's salaries results in more expectations, and it would be a force on them to do their job better. Also, it is a kind of motivation for them, they try hard to save their job because they want its money. Currently, many university professors work out of the campus in different positions. By giving them enough salary, to university can prevent them to do off campus jobs, then they will spend more time doing university matters and educations.
To summarize, increasing the professor's salary will result in enhancing the educational quality.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employers'' or 'employer's'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, well, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1873.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96816976127 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78041280284 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480106100796 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 590.4 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0443562343 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1904761905 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9523809524 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7619047619 5.45110844103 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228956551422 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763024580728 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501040065601 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139712676154 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642513069172 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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