Topic: Which one is the most important factor to help you work productively:
Having an environment free of noise and distractions
2. Knowing that you will receive a reward
3. Doing something you are interested in
Today, people pay more attention to how to work more productively since the competitive pressure is growing. Someone thinks having an environment free of noise and distractions is the most important factor to help work productively. Others agree that knowing that you will receive a reward is the most important factor. It seems that all perspectives above are reasonable, however, in my opinion, the most important factor is doing something you are interested in.
That is because doing something who are interested in will make him excited. It just like his dream comes true for someone who can work in something he is interested in. By working with passion, people will work more productively since they can keep concentrating. This argument will serve me better if we take my friend Amy, who was interested in writing since she was a child, as an example. Amy is a writer now but she studied surgery when she was in university. After graduation, Amy first worked in a hospital, however, because she did not like her job, she was exhausted all the time. No matter how quiet she workplace was, or how big award hospital set to reward outstanding doctors, she was indifferent to her job. Last year, she resigned and became a writer. When I met her on this July, she had written and published 3 novels, which was amazing prolific production. Therefore, you can see that interest is the most important factor to help work productively.
Besides, doing something who are interested in will make people keep improve themselves in working. As an old saying goes: “Interest is the best teacher.” When working about what they like, people will keep pursuing perfection in his work. Take my father for an example. My father is an outstanding electrical engineer. He enjoyed explaining his work for me, and every time he talked about work his happiness effused obviously. My father also has a habit, which he has kept for more than 20 years, that he will search information for working next day. Therefore, my father has many fascinating work, such as, in my town there were 3 famous electricity projects designed by my father individually. In contrast, my uncle also work for electricity company, but he was not interested about his work at all. Once the company set up an award to reward the most effective design of electrical machine. My uncle was intrigued, and to win the reward, he specially blocked himself in reading room. However, he still cannot design a satisfying work. Therefore, you see that the most important factor to help someone work productively is doing something he is interested in.
Admittedly, having an environment free of noise and distractions is helpful since that we can focus on work, however, without interest, we will easily feel tired. And knowing that you will receive a reward maybe intrigue someone to work hardly, but working productively need constant efforts. A short intrigue is not useful.
In conclusion, the most important factor is doing something you are interested in.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...apos;Interest is the best teacher.' When working about what they like, peopl...
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Line 9, column 816, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s not interested about his work at all. Once the company set up an award to reward t...
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Line 13, column 234, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'hardly' is usually put before the verb 'work'.
Suggestion: hardly work
...eive a reward maybe intrigue someone to work hardly, but working productively need constant...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 15.1003584229 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2536.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 506.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01185770751 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7428307748 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8410209636 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46837944664 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 788.4 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3479580503 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5333333333 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361180226202 0.236089414692 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117370641968 0.076458572812 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130095127462 0.0737576698707 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296466525777 0.150856017488 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117958700457 0.0645574589148 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.