It is equally important that we make new friends and maintain our old friends. As we need new friends to share our developing interests and assist in the new changes of life along with our trustworthy old friends to provide with guidance.
Firstly, as we develop our interests changes so it is important that our friends should also share similar interests. Not all of your new interests may not be shared by your current friends and some of these area may require friends assistance. For example, if you want to pursue boxing you may need a friend to spar with unless you don't have friend you will difficult in pursuing the interest. So, we must make new friends with whom we can share the new interest.
In addition to that, we may have live in different places far away from our friends. It may be difficult for an old friend to help you at these places, so it is important that you find new friends when you are living in a new place. For example, if you want to do higher studies abroad and your friends may not coming so you have to make new friends with people who are studying in that place. So, new friends are needed to assist you with changes in life.
However, there are situation in your life where you might need some guidance from friends. These are situation you might need the help of your old friends as they know you for a long time their suggestion will be more suitable to you. In addition to that, they can be trusted more as you know them for a long period. So, it is more easy for you discuss your personal problems with your old friends than to your new friends.
To sum it up, we can say that we should give equal importance for maintaining the old friends and making the new friends. As they all have important roles to play in your life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 203, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this area' or 'these areas'?
Suggestion: this area; these areas
...red by your current friends and some of these area may require friends assistance. For exa...
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Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...y need a friend to spar with unless you dont have friend you will difficult in pursu...
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Line 3, column 344, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'friended'.
Suggestion: friended
...riend to spar with unless you dont have friend you will difficult in pursuing the inte...
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Line 7, column 20, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'situations'?
Suggestion: situations
... changes in life. However, there are situation in your life where you might need some ...
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Line 7, column 282, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ition to that, they can be trusted more as you know them for a long period. So, it...
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Line 9, column 123, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...old friends and making the new friends. As they all have important roles to play i...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'for example', 'in addition', 'you know']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.170868347339 0.229887763892 74% => OK
Verbs: 0.159663865546 0.158761421928 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.100840336134 0.0866891130778 116% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0448179271709 0.046263068375 97% => OK
Pronouns: 0.140056022409 0.0685040099705 204% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.134453781513 0.118717715034 113% => OK
Participles: 0.0364145658263 0.0351676179071 104% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.23334772414 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0392156862745 0.0309702414327 127% => OK
Particles: 0.00280112044818 0.00188951952338 148% => OK
Determiners: 0.0588235294118 0.0887237588012 66% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0448179271709 0.0209618222197 214% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0112044817927 0.0139019557991 81% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1773.0 2387.08602151 74% => OK
No of words: 330.0 408.028673835 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37272727273 5.86048508987 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.269696969697 0.338922669872 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.206060606061 0.251872472559 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.121212121212 0.174417080927 69% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0666666666667 0.112833075102 59% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23334772414 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 212.727598566 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4 0.524397521467 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 39.5304305492 59.2087087015 67% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 20.625 20.5533526081 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7956085591 48.84282405 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.8125 120.699889404 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.5533526081 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 0.644075263715 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 41.2310606061 45.7405998639 90% => OK
Elegance: 0.991869918699 1.45489161554 68% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419733076233 0.300154397459 140% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.199488613314 0.103427244359 193% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.114900362172 0.0752933317313 153% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.602298404495 0.497263757937 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.145353665646 0.151897553556 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.196539711799 0.114077575197 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949090335235 0.0781384742642 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.435318648215 0.336927656856 129% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0892619753896 0.067059652881 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.307715255697 0.210909579961 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282246108333 0.0618886996521 46% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8870967742 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 15.0 8.42114695341 178% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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