TPO-04 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Today's most common mode of transportation used by people are cars but this trend is not likely to continue. There is a high chance that the number of cars will reduce in the future because of the reason explained below.

The oil prices are rising daily. The price we pay today is almost triple that of the price we paid 10 years before. This trend is likely to continue as the number of oil reserves are decreasing. In addition to that, the population of the world is also increasing which resulted in an increased consumption. So, the prices of oil will increase in the coming years. The search for alternate energy source like electric power is not practically viable in large scale. They have difficulty in storing power and the cars made using them is too costly for common man. So, There is high chance that people will not able to afford a car in the future as there is not point in buying cars as the fuel is too costly to use.

In addition to that, the people around world are getting concerned over the air pollution and its effect of global warming. The smoke from cars have a great role in the increase in the green house gases. So in future there is high chance that the government is likely to restrict the use of cars in the future in order to save the environment. Further, the people are becoming environmentally conscious day by day and there will increase in concern of nature in the future. The people are more likely to depend on the public transport and green solutions like bicycles. We can see this trend in the most of the developed countries where there is an increase in the use of bicycles.

Furthermore, Now a days people are more living in the urban areas close to their work place. In addition to that, the use of robotics and internet have reduced the need for human presence at work. In addition to that online learning technology will reduce the need to go to school. Which all will result in decrease the need for travelling in the future and which will likely result in the reduced number of cars in the future.

So, due to above reasons we can conclude that there will less number of cars in the future.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 14, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...in the use of bicycles. Furthermore, Now a days people are more living in the urban are...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'in addition']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25890736342 0.229887763892 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.140142517815 0.158761421928 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0712589073634 0.0866891130778 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0593824228029 0.046263068375 128% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0190023752969 0.0685040099705 28% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.152019002375 0.118717715034 128% => OK
Participles: 0.0332541567696 0.0351676179071 95% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.35334086874 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0356294536817 0.0309702414327 115% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.128266033254 0.0887237588012 145% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0237529691211 0.0209618222197 113% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00712589073634 0.0139019557991 51% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2150.0 2387.08602151 90% => OK
No of words: 392.0 408.028673835 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48469387755 5.86048508987 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.303571428571 0.338922669872 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.15306122449 0.251872472559 61% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.122448979592 0.174417080927 70% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0663265306122 0.112833075102 59% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35334086874 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441326530612 0.524397521467 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.5125546212 59.2087087015 79% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.6666666667 20.5533526081 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7808070911 48.84282405 57% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.380952381 120.699889404 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.5533526081 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.285714285714 0.644075263715 44% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 33.9727891156 45.7405998639 74% => OK
Elegance: 2.03260869565 1.45489161554 140% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293247867578 0.300154397459 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.119014170727 0.103427244359 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0631942546689 0.0752933317313 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.605160207527 0.497263757937 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.142703191148 0.151897553556 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13929702134 0.114077575197 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548249093255 0.0781384742642 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.545924513797 0.336927656856 162% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.122793212942 0.067059652881 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219194588769 0.210909579961 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04429827645 0.0618886996521 72% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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