Some people have same group of friends from childhood to old age. They are reluctant to make new friends because they maybe shy or skeptical. Others prefer to make new friends whenever life gives them a chance. They may or may not hold on to their old friends. I believe it is as important to make new friends as it is to hold on to the old ones.
Firstly, we get introduced to new ideas when we befriend new people. We enhance our view of the world when we meet different people as they have different perspective, culture and opinion. During high school I grew up with same set of friends that I had in kindergarten. Being exposed to Bollywood only, we had similar, parochial tastes in music and movies. Inspite of several english movies being played in near by movie theatre none of us ever suggested or felt the need to explore our horizons. Upon joining university, I befriended diverse group of people. Apart from their local cinema, they introduced me to mainstream english cinema. I was exhilarated to discover thrillers and science fiction genres in movies like “Exorcist” and “Back to the future”. Had I not made new friends, I would not have known about such great movies that I now thoroughly enjoy.
Secondly, as old friends may migrate to new cities, friendships may suffer. Though communication does not seem a problem these days with mobile phones and internet, physical distance imposes certain restrictions. After graduation my friends and I started working for companies in different cities. Although, we do communicate with each other, I can only rely on my colleagues at work for any physical help that I need. Recently, when I shifted to a new locality, I had only my new friends to thank for, who helped me move. Also when I face problems regarding work, its only my new friends who can help me as they understand the problem better. They know the circumstances I am in. Whereas college friends cannot provide expedient advice due to their limited knowledge of my situation. Thus, distance plays a key role in maintaining relationship. As it is highly unlikely that we will be staying the same place for all our life, making new friends becomes important.
Thus, I believe one should give importance to making new friends. Each of our friends brings a new idea with her, a new philosophy, a new way of living. Making new friends exposes us to these new ideas. Because it is unlikely that we and our friends live in the same city for eternity, it is expedient to make new friends where ever we are.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'regarding', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'thus', 'whereas', 'apart from']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.209486166008 0.229887763892 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.160079051383 0.158761421928 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.112648221344 0.0866891130778 130% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0434782608696 0.046263068375 94% => OK
Pronouns: 0.114624505929 0.0685040099705 167% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.102766798419 0.118717715034 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0296442687747 0.0351676179071 84% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.77748703213 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0395256916996 0.0309702414327 128% => OK
Particles: 0.00197628458498 0.00188951952338 105% => OK
Determiners: 0.0434782608696 0.0887237588012 49% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0197628458498 0.0209618222197 94% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0158102766798 0.0139019557991 114% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2550.0 2387.08602151 107% => OK
No of words: 443.0 408.028673835 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75620767494 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.338600451467 0.338922669872 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.277652370203 0.251872472559 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.146726862302 0.174417080927 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.110609480813 0.112833075102 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77748703213 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534988713318 0.524397521467 102% => OK
Word variations: 62.3593161015 59.2087087015 105% => OK
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6684587814 135% => OK
Sentence length: 15.8214285714 20.5533526081 77% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4513608015 48.84282405 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0714285714 120.699889404 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8214285714 20.5533526081 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.428571428571 0.644075263715 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 43.5866655917 45.7405998639 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.07453416149 1.45489161554 74% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350742271771 0.300154397459 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0844973418315 0.103427244359 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0774885239555 0.0752933317313 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.412206791178 0.497263757937 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.141902009804 0.151897553556 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113514993117 0.114077575197 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902548931909 0.0781384742642 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.323522879445 0.336927656856 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0628674156548 0.067059652881 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272011987303 0.210909579961 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924205160787 0.0618886996521 149% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8870967742 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 17.0 8.42114695341 202% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.6433691756 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.