TPO-04 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Car is the most important vehicle for the commuting of people today. It helps people in many ways. However, because it pollutes the environment, so people are warned to protect environment by using cars as less as possible. Therefore, I believe that in twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. I feel this way for three reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.

First of all, since people know that cars affect negatively on environment, they have tried to use public transportation more than before. That means if more and more people recognize their responsibilities to keep the clean for their global environment, the rate of traveling by cars will be reduced significantly. A program in my university is a compelling example of this case. The university where I am studying encourages students go to school by bus or any other transportation in order to reduce pollution. Many students including me have participated in that group. We have found a lot of fun when we have gone to school together on the buses.

Secondly, compared to ten years ago, there were very few people that used cars. That means if in twenty years people will be inventing some kinds of new vehicles, which will be more convenient and more comfortable than cars. Therefore, the idea that in twenty years cars will be using fewer is possible.

Last but not least, recently people have preferred travel by airplane to cars. It is because traveling by airplane is faster and safer than traveling by cars. Moreover, people tend to commute airplane to show off their dignity, so they even travel by airplane in short distance. That reason supports the idea that in twenty years people may not use car as much as they do now.

In conclusion, people have different ideas about the issues of whether or not in twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. In my opinion, for three reasons, which I have just mentioned above, I strongly believe that this idea would be true.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 212, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...otect environment by using cars as less as possible. Therefore, I believe that in ...
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Line 9, column 64, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...ave different ideas about the issues of whether or not in twenty years there will be fewer car...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, i feel, in conclusion, in short, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77936962751 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65015564291 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481375358166 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 527.4 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6994047569 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.45 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.65 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240854167216 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888939245381 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107361066989 0.0737576698707 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15780208951 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659329336704 0.0645574589148 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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