TPO-06 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As everything in life is like a coin that has two different sides, people must weigh in pros and cons before jumping in conclusions. After all, each and every question or topic requires careful deliberation in that there are multiple variables to a truth. Some people believe that life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. In my humble opinion, if push comes to shove, in today modern advancement in technology and innovation life truly is more pleasant and comfortable for the following reasons.
First of all, the majority of individuals who agree to the notion of living in this modern era has it's perks. Yes there are a lot of advantages due to the technology is so widespread now that everything can be done easily, more reliably and in a more faster rate. Invention of gadgets such as laptop, cellphone, airplanes, trains these inventions are not yet build on the time of our grandparents. In other words, we can maximize our time well with these inventions. For example cellphone was invented to bridge the gap in communication, we can communicate with our love ones much easily with just a click in a button. Social media apps like messenger, instagram which instantly will connect you to all people around the globe. In addition to this, my friend Amir who is the head of the company in Manila usually travel to other countries just to attend to business meetings or conferences, but, with the use of Social Media like skype he longer don't go to places just to talk with clients. In other words, he just log in to his skype account and Amir can contact his clients through video conferences and meetings. For him he saves on money, time and a lot of effort.
On top of this, the way our grandparents live in their time are more difficult compared to ours which can results in unfavorable ramifications. Everything in their era are on manual labor, all efforts must be exerted to be able to finish task at hand. A great example of this is when they are preparing for a meal, my grandfather Oscar also tells us that they would go fishing just to have a meal to their plate. Everything they need takes a lot of time from fruits and vegetable which takes weeks to months before eating it, raising chicken and cow for their eggs and beef takes months before harvest. Way back they don't have stove, what they would do they will chop off pieces of lumber in the forest and bring back to their house to make a fire for their stove. Oscar usually tells us that they don't have the luxury of living like ours and we are lucky that we don't experience the way they live before. Long story short, it's clear as day to me that it's in a difficult situation to live on their time because there are no advancement in technology yet and majority of tasks must be done manually.
In summation, yes, it's virtually impossible to answer completely satisfying answer to an open ended question. Although the jury may be out on this given essay topic, we can come to mutual agreement that living in today generation has become more comfortable and easier to live due to reasons and details mentioned above.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'faster' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: faster
... be done easily, more reliably and in a more faster rate. Invention of gadgets such as lapt...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...se of Social Media like skype he longer dont go to places just to talk with clients....
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n money, time and a lot of effort. On top of this, the way our grandparents...
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Line 7, column 107, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'result'
Suggestion: result
...re difficult compared to ours which can results in unfavorable ramifications. Everythin...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...es months before harvest. Way back they dont have stove, what they would do they wil...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...stove. Oscar usually tells us that they dont have the luxury of living like ours and...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ving like ours and we are lucky that we dont experience the way they live before. Lo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, well, after all, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 92.0 52.1666666667 176% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2592.0 1977.66487455 131% => OK
No of words: 560.0 407.700716846 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62857142857 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.8645985582 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5538486363 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 286.0 212.727598566 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510714285714 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 824.4 618.680645161 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.3759320192 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.818181818 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164236225936 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499869098934 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884258435091 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115332539002 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790265269578 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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