Nowadays, internet has developed unpredictable which helps people so much every part of life. Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. I agree with the opinion that internet suplly people with a lot of cauntless information for several reasons which I will state the following sentences.
To begin with, internet is every thing for people recently since it makes life easliy. For instance, I am working as a researcher in the university and I should be able to get information every time quickly and correctly. To search information is old-fashion, hard and time-wasting. However, thanks to google scholar or etc. I can get every information suddenly and countless. To illustrate, my supervisor told me without internet to obtain information was really hard and was not always what you wanted search. p
The other reason why internet is very signifacant is that people can aware of everything around world such as news, entertainment, sports. For example, thanks to social media people can gain even redundant information each other and sometimes it provides to help each other. Owing to internet, we can manage our daily lifes jobs readily such as bancs , shopping, goverment jobs.
To sum up, internet is very crucial for the life what ı state above sentences and these days it is indispensable every age of people which assure people great information. Of course, it can damage specially chidren when it is used harmfull way. But, its benefits are unquestionable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: P
... was not always what you wanted search. p The other reason why internet is very ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...r daily lifes jobs readily such as bancs , shopping, goverment jobs. To sum up, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, so, for example, for instance, of course, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 255.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16862745098 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91815438248 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623529411765 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4811233424 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.375 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9375 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36225451663 0.236089414692 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118117594749 0.076458572812 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126569810385 0.0737576698707 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219334680341 0.150856017488 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.169120573979 0.0645574589148 262% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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