TPO-11 - Independent Writing Task Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?Use specific reasons and examples to support you

Technology has a great empowerment and advancement in a globally now-a-days, that it seems permanently solution to everyone problem, which can be solve by sitting in front of screen either at home place or at the road side. This internet connection affects the regular activity by supply lots of information regarding any kind with in a few seconds. I mean, just suppose; how can a simple machine can deliver you a-tons of material only for a single word. In my opinion, it does not gives extra and useless details to establish a problem, in stead of, provides a precious knowledge to a person and thus solves his related question. Likewise: for a research purpose, most of the students have now computers subjects and in a professionalism.

First of all, internet has uncountable source and resource as well, that it can overcome with every step that finds a challenging for yourself. Lets talk about the researcher, he/she wants to research on particular topic on to which, people questioned or asked and now the comes when he/she has to prove it, but if there is lack of information over the worldwide area, how can he/she going to compare with other research? Thus, this internet hands over the material in brief way and many of the researcher got success by using this technology.

Secondly, in universities and colleges, there are computer based subjects for which, they need this type of connection, so that, students can effectively manage their major and minor theoretical course. It overcome the issue, when many students just ran off to the professor and other assistant for gaining the assessment on to little, little problems they faced. Whereas, now they have the command into their fingertips by the help of internet.

Lastly, being in a profession, for example: a doctor, would interact different kind of difficulties and as a main supervisor or head of department, even cannot proceed in a discussion, on the other hand, could not leave the situation as well. In these kinds of stuffs, you just turn on internet devices and in a minor seconds, are going to connect thousand of other colleagues with out any ashamed. However, internet also save you in this especial kind of profession.

To sum up, while every thing has many advantage and disadvantage, perhaps it would have much benefits and priorities over it, an object has hold different views on a community and I think, this net serves the mode of information very gently to the population.

Votes
Average: 7.7 (3 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 484, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
...single word. In my opinion, it does not gives extra and useless details to establish ...
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Line 1, column 540, Rule ID: IN_STEAD_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'instead of'?
Suggestion: instead of
...useless details to establish a problem, in stead of, provides a precious knowledge to a per...
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Line 1, column 562, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'precious knowledge'.
Suggestion: precious knowledge
...ablish a problem, in stead of, provides a precious knowledge to a person and thus solves his related...
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Line 1, column 633, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Likewise,
...n and thus solves his related question. Likewise: for a research purpose, most of the st...
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Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
... that finds a challenging for yourself. Lets talk about the researcher, he/she wants...
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Line 3, column 385, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'goes'.
Suggestion: goes
...over the worldwide area, how can he/she going to compare with other research? Thus, t...
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Line 5, column 207, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'overcomes'?
Suggestion: overcomes
... major and minor theoretical course. It overcome the issue, when many students just ran ...
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Line 7, column 349, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...n a minor seconds, are going to connect thousand of other colleagues with out any ashame...
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Line 7, column 378, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...to connect thousand of other colleagues with out any ashamed. However, internet also sav...
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Line 9, column 34, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'many advantages'.
Suggestion: many advantages
...on. To sum up, while every thing has many advantage and disadvantage, perhaps it would have...
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Line 9, column 89, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...and disadvantage, perhaps it would have much benefits and priorities over it, an obj...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, lastly, likewise, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, well, whereas, while, as to, for example, i mean, i think, in brief, kind of, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2059.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94951923077 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80697497258 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584134615385 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 639.0 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.0010229194 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.266666667 100.406767564 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7333333333 20.6045352989 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.8666666667 5.45110844103 273% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153272933425 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048819268959 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038101757449 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0783857896672 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306531648219 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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