Nowadays traveling is a part of everyone life because we all traveling to get the new experience. Especially, the current generation young people are traveling around the world for a different purpose such as education, business, and fun. I'm of the convection, traveling within the country could be more benefited then traveling to the abroad because it is less expensive and no restrictions.
To begin with, economic benefits, if we travel within the country is cheaper because we can use multiple transport systems like Bus, car, train and also a domesticate flights. However, if the people plane to travel abroad, they might need to save a lot money for transportation because of the limited ways to reach like flights and the ships. For example recently, one of my friend ram move to the abroad for his higher studies. When he booked his flight I was surprised by seeing the fair, it is a whole lot of money. I suggested him better not to go foreign country because of we a plenty of educational institutions to study and no need to spend a lot of money for traveling on every vacation.
In addition to that, if the people travel in their home country no need to follow any immigration rules. when we travel in our own country we have a citizenship and we can travel anywhere at any time without any restrictions. In contrast, if I travel a foreign contry, I should need to arrange a set of documents to fulfill their contry requirements and I have to follow even if I don't like. For example, my uncle recently visited Canada for his business expansion. he spends two weeks dedicatedly for arranging required documents to carry and he feels very frustrated sometimes. I don't think this situation could occur if he travels the home country.
In conclusion, traveling within the contry is more benefited then travel abroad, because it is more safe and convenient and also less expensive.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I'm
...e such as education, business, and fun. Im of the convection, traveling within the...
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...t systems like Bus, car, train and also a domesticate flights. However, if the people plane t...
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Suggestion: lot
...s surprised by seeing the fair, it is a whole lot of money. I suggested him better not to...
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Line 2, column 568, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because we' instead.
Suggestion: because we
...ed him better not to go foreign country because of we a plenty of educational institutions to...
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Suggestion: When
...o need to follow any immigration rules. when we travel in our own country we have a ...
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Suggestion: don't
...irements and I have to follow even if I dont like. For example, my uncle recently vi...
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Suggestion: He
...ited Canada for his business expansion. he spends two weeks dedicatedly for arrang...
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Suggestion: don't
...d he feels very frustrated sometimes. I dont think this situation could occur if he ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, then, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78899082569 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80987672912 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535168195719 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2991276296 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.4 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201755014566 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769953228984 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544879064313 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143551258334 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306644163187 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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