Traveling has influential and tremendous impact on our lives. When comes to this topic, some people may agree with the statement and give us sounds reason to support their belief. On the other hands, some people might disagree with the idea and have different opinion. Also those opponent probably with provide us puissant evidence to support their thought. I disagree with this idea and believe that is beneficial when I travel to foreign country for the following reason.
To begin with, traveling to foreign country has incontrovertible affect to everyone's language and culture knowledge. Instead of become a dumb when you travel to a foreign country, most of the people will start to learn some greeting language before they go the the country. This action can give impetus to learning, take myself as an example, I went to Thailand few month ago, I heard some of the Thais are hardly understand to English so I learned some greeting language and numbers in Thai before I went there. When I arrived, I discovered most of the Thai businessman use an calculator to negotiate price with foreign customer, nonetheless, I used my poor Thai language skill to communicate with them eventually they show affability and and teach me how to pronounce correctly.
Secondly, people will be more challenging and more achievable when they travel to a completely unfamiliar place,additionally, planning and managing during travel can lead to training our work efficiency and drastically improve our working processing ability.Moreover, many studied which have been done by many universities in United States constantly stated that travel to foreign country can expand our knowledge and ability and this result can beneficial to our work and study, and more studied was studying this subject. Finally, scholars confirm this idea and this idea make me believe that travel to a foreign country will benefit more than travel in our own country.
For all have been discussed may finally draw a conclusion that say people who travel to a foreign country benefit more than to our own country. Traveling to foreign country can explore a unfamiliar new world but travel in own country is reinforce what you are familiar with. People who hold opposite opinion have right to believe.But my opinion and others are overwhelmingly to much too be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1957.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 382.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12303664921 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83203125524 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520942408377 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.606412258 48.9658058833 230% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 139.785714286 100.406767564 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2857142857 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298611603918 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124914572193 0.076458572812 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075872539382 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19647163062 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728915486937 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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