TPO 22- Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom
Over the past few decades, the issue of whether teacher should reveal their social and political opinion in the classroms has received a great deal of attention from parents ans sociologists. Although some may argue that school is a place for education and students should be known to other fields, I as well as many others believe that it not beneficial for the students and it might distract them from their studies. I am of the opinion that both of these viewpoints have their own merits and drawbacks, an the following explanations will further elaborate on this perspective.
First of all, an paramount reason why teacher should not talk about their social and political orientation is that students are not mature enough. Plenty number of students do not have sufficient knowledge about current affairs since orienting them might be harmful. They might follow an incorrect viewpoint which can be effective on their future. As a case of point, I had a cousin who were familiar with marques theory by his teacher. He followed the teacher association and involved in political events. He got arrested by police some years later due to his activities against government.
A further reason for this view is that school is a place for educating specific knowledge such as math, literature and science. It is sometimes said that the major duty of the teachers is to train the students with respect to principle of the schools. Some sociologists state that student should be away from political and social events as a matter of fact that they are not in community as well as their parents and other adults and they might not recogonize the events comprehensively. In addition,involving students to these events could be a great distraction and they might not be able to concentrate on their studies.
On the other hand, it is occasionally said that as the basis of the schools is education students should be familiar with other aspects of the life such social and political events. becoming familiar with this aspects, students might be persuade to learn and get information about them which is a beneficial affair for society. familiaring the students with these matters not only powering their perspectives but also persuade them to pay attention to other aspects of life.
In brief, contemplating all the aforementioned reasons above, I personally believe that teachers should not speak about their social and political views in education institution chiefly due to providing distraction for the students and orienting their own viewpoints.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, well, in addition, in brief, such as, as a matter of fact, as well as, first of all, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2139.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11722488038 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85565876433 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473684210526 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 645.3 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0656732793 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.823529412 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5882352941 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.82352941176 5.45110844103 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299936607343 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105229826393 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801339087443 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199534774966 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488467817065 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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