Tpo 25
Without any shadow of doubt, the youth are the cornerstone of any successful society--or, to put it in another way, the more qualified the young people of a country are, the more powerful the country is. With this in mind, some believe that nowadays, young people have less time to assist their societies, while others hold the opposite view. I, personally, subscribe to the first attitude based on quite a few reasons, two of the most substantial of which are elaborated upon hereunder.
The most compelling reason is that in today's modern world, everyone has to be in rush so as not to be left behind in contending for the "field of competition", and they are more focusing on their goals, which bring them about fortune. Hence, they work more and more in order to achieve their targets. Moreover, there are a great deal of issues, which they have to deal with from early ages. As a point in view, teenage children are required to study hard to be able to enter universities. After graduation, they should try a lot to take proper jobs with appropriate income. As a result, young people rarely have leisure time to spend it with their societies.
Another interpretation as to why I do not concur with the latter perspective in the introductory paragraph lies in the fact that today's lifestyle is different from the past; indeed, the galloping rate of technology improvement has affected human beings' lives so that the absence of affinity is felt more and more among mankind. In other word, some ethical principals which were pivotal in the past, have lost their significance. This issue is more perceived among young people, who do not care about others' problems, and just think about themselves. I remember that in the past, whenever any disaster was occurred, apart from of governmental groups, there were many voluntarily groups, which were formed by the young people, in order to help damaged people. Or, in the summer, there were several young individuals going to remote area in order to teach poor children. Unfortunately, today, all those precious behaviors have lost their meaning.
In summary, having considered all the aforementioned arguments discussed above, I firmly endorse my point of view that nowadays, young individuals are too busy--thanks to today's hectic and competitive life and deterioration of morality among them--which prevents them from helping their societies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'deals'?
Suggestion: deals
...ir targets. Moreover, there are a great deal of issues, which they have to deal with...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... time to spend it with their societies. Another interpretation as to why I do no...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...ductory paragraph lies in the fact that todays lifestyle is different from the past; i...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ents them from helping their societies.
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'hence', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'while', 'apart from', 'as to', 'in summary', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.208333333333 0.229887763892 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.166666666667 0.158761421928 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0899122807018 0.0866891130778 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0504385964912 0.046263068375 109% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0482456140351 0.0685040099705 70% => OK
Prepositions: 0.135964912281 0.118717715034 115% => OK
Participles: 0.0416666666667 0.0351676179071 118% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.77036177275 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0372807017544 0.0309702414327 120% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0855263157895 0.0887237588012 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00219298245614 0.0209618222197 10% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0219298245614 0.0139019557991 158% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2396.0 2387.08602151 100% => OK
No of words: 397.0 408.028673835 97% => OK
Chars per words: 6.03526448363 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.32241813602 0.338922669872 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.24685138539 0.251872472559 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.181360201511 0.174417080927 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.128463476071 0.112833075102 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77036177275 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566750629723 0.524397521467 108% => OK
Word variations: 66.006349674 59.2087087015 111% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 24.8125 20.5533526081 121% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.1462007537 48.84282405 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.75 120.699889404 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8125 20.5533526081 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 0.644075263715 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 49.497638539 45.7405998639 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.45454545455 1.45489161554 100% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.300154397459 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0836832231124 0.103427244359 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0653122359325 0.0752933317313 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.527541587139 0.497263757937 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.202245303715 0.151897553556 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.114077575197 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0781384742642 0% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.321714408153 0.336927656856 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.060420998785 0.067059652881 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.210909579961 0% => The content is off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0618886996521 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8870967742 50% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 8.42114695341 36% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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