TPO-28 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays, parents play a significant role in their children success. As children grow, their parents put more effort to provide them a better education which is essential for their future accomplishments. I firmly believe that parents are more concerned about their children in today's society as compared with the past. In this essay, I'll provide reasons that support this idea.

The first point I want to make is that entering the university has become more competitive recently. This requires parents to be more concerned about their children preparation to be qualified in university entrance exam. For instance, when I was at high school, my father helped me with understanding the concepts of physics and mathematics. He taught me how to solve problems quicker to prepare for the actual exam.

Another point I want to mention is that nowadays schools are more open to the parents and they provide more information on how their child is performing at their studies. Furthermore, some parents are required to provide a more suitable environment for their children so that they can be more productive while studying. For example, I had a Dutch practicing session every Sunday at home where I was supposed to write assignments for my school. Eventually, My grandmother came to visit me every Sunday. There is a custom that different family members gather together so the grandmother visits her children. Our house was so full of people that I had trouble understanding and doing my homework properly. As a result, my grades were so bad that my teacher asked my parents to hold these family meetings outside the house.

As the final point, since parents spend more money to provide all suitable conditions and educational facilities for their children, they simply expect them to study more. In my country, registration fees for a software engineering major of a mid-class university is about 5000$ per semester. Naturally, this huge amount of money forces the parents to be more concerned about how their children perform in university.

To put it in a nutshell, parents are required to deal with the competitive nature of education as well as higher educational fees and payments. Moreover, the schools are meant to provide feedback of the performance of their children. To make a long story short, parents are more involved in their children's education than before.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1994.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12596401028 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83502223301 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516709511568 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4150042867 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9523809524 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5238095238 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.80952380952 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265346858961 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909962756279 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760426690979 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177118119285 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748399421901 0.0645574589148 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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