Many people think that the youth nowadays are useless or in other words with no influence on their societies. They say that the youth just care about the social media and they don't pay any attention to the politics. Although I understand their point of view, I have a different opinion. I believe that the young people have a great influence on the society because they have enthusiasm and they have greats ideas.
First of all, youth, in general, is well known for the incredible power and enthusiasm they carry internally inside their minds and bodies. Once they discovered something wrong or something against their principles, their enthusiasm and eagerness start to motivate them involuntarily and very powerfully to correct the wrong situations. For example, in 2011 in Egypt, the youth got overwhelmed by being unemployed and from the unexpected inflation rate. They run into the capital's streets and gathered themselves and they started the first flam of a big revolution, The revolution that changed the history of Egypt. Within few days of strikes, the president surrendered his chair. What was so amazing about this revolution, not only that the president left his authorities after thirty years as a president, but also that it was so peaceful, without any victims. Youth can change the countries' future.
Second, Even though youth may spend a big part of their time on social media pages, they still capable of enriching the community with non-end ideas and updates. For example, Mark Zuckerberg was just in his twenties when he invented the facebook. The website that becomes the most famous and most usable among all the other websites in the world full of non-end use of the internet. He continues to develop it for not only be a place to share photos but to become a place that begins revolutions and big changes. It even now affect the countries economy. Simply, people started to use the facebook to market their products, they don't have to have a real store or shop to display their goods. Few pictures of their products and a written description with one click and they already started their business online, and it becomes available to much more people than if they put their goods at a regular store. Youth developed the idea of losing their time on the social media pages, to gaining money and making business. Youth usually have unbeatable ideas,
In conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above, I encourage every authority in our community to give chance to the young people. why you don't try to put just two or three young people in authority or managerial positions. You will see for yourself how much updates and changes they will do and how much they will eager the surrounding employees work harder. This all will work for the benefit of our community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, still, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, in general, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2314.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 473.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89217758985 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53021114789 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541226215645 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 711.0 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9324012123 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.608695652 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5652173913 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47826086957 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0829690172771 0.236089414692 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0258981568775 0.076458572812 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415928335124 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0630924739058 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503568456883 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.