TPO 33 Independent Writing
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
When teachers assign projects on which students must work together, the students learn much more effectively than when they are asked to work alone on projects.
education is a principal concept in every society and teachers and professors undertake this momentous responsibility. Quality of education is important because it has a great impact on people who will construct the future of the society. Furthermore, the progression or recession of a community is completely depends on the decisions which current students will take in the future. Some instructors believe that collaboration of the students in a group to fulfill a project will be conducive to learn matters more efficiently. personally I think that this belief is precise and I confirm it due to two substantial reasons.
First, I heard a statement that teaching is the best way for learning information. Instruction is a by-product of teamwork. For example, When students deal with each other in a group, they should divide the project in smaller parts and each person must shoulder a part according to his/her abilities. Eventually, every person have to present his /her investigation for other members and it is a kind teaching so the information will be solidified for the presenter and this occurrence will happened for all members in turn and finally the average perception of the students has increased.
Second, consulting is a supporting point in a group but it has a direct influence on learning of the members. Different notions always exist in a group. As a result, it leads to raise varied ideas and challenging with each other. The beneficial outcome of these debates is valuable because students learn that they should deal with each other and finally they must make a collective decision which helps their progress.
In conclusion, I believe that the consequences of a team work for doing a project are positive. Not only teamwork improves the learning capacity of the students but also it learns them that dealing with members is an important strategy for accomplishment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Education
education is a principal concept in every society...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 529, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Personally
...cive to learn matters more efficiently. personally I think that this belief is precise and...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 491, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'happen'
Suggestion: happen
... the presenter and this occurrence will happened for all members in turn and finally the...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, second, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 309.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15210355987 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03434258897 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553398058252 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7107532119 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.133333333 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194670165468 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574624937207 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052758758791 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117245264529 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168577289397 0.0645574589148 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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