TPO 48 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
planning of life is a momentous matter for each person and human beings always looking for doing their tasks more precisely and more efficiently in parallel. Some people believes that in present time which in lifestyle has changed severely, individuals should have a great power of planning and organizing in their ongoing life. personally, I confirm this notion and I think planning is an indispensable ability for human being nowadays. I will substantiate my point of view in the following paragraphs.
The first thing coming to mind to elucidate my standpoint in concerned with this issue that people must do numerous tasks simultaneously. Certainly, it is the by-product of technological advances. I will explain a personal experiment to illustrate this matter. I work for a construction company which is incorporated about twenty years ago. The rate of construction for this company has increased intensively in the recent years and the main reason is the utilizing different softwares for design and calculation. As a result, employees should keep in pace with this high rate and the most instrumental remedy is planning and organizing.
The second reason behind my opinion is rooted in the fact that without planning, the possibility of making mistakes is very higher and the compensation of these errors are drastic. Therefore, people are doing their best to prevent these consequences by being organized. In order to shed light on this issue I bring an example. my colleague was a disorganized person and he did his task haphazardly. Eventually, he erred in a critical point and the company underwent a vast cost impact and time impact. As a result, he was fired. this experience taught me that I should be well-organized and purposeful in my job and in my life.
In brief, I believe that people are prone to be well-planned and more organized nowadays because not only they must adapt themselves with the accelerating speed of advances but also they should minimize their mistakes in their job position and their routine life.
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...ir job position and their routine life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, second, so, therefore, well, i think, in brief, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12574850299 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02054114854 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559880239521 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1916854874 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1111111111 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154290664246 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426316541368 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363642976564 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959829253494 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040419316431 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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