Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that the famous people have not enough privacy, like another people in the society. Contrary to this popular beliefs there are still those who argue that the famous people break their own privacy and put their personal information in the social websites or public databases to increase their favorite between people. And the responsibility for less privacy is related to themselves. I, to a great extent, agree with this idea that the famous people should have more privacy than they have today's.
First and foremost, some the people think that they have this allow that saying everything about the famous people. These people believe that because the famous people are known in the society for most of the people, thus they can leave ideas about them, even about their personal and private life. For example, a famous Masii that he is really famous in the football sport. He has very close his family information toward news networks. But, unfortunately, people make ideas about his family and his personal relationships.
On another significant fact, that should be taken into the consideration is that some people using from famous people to make money. For example, some low accuracy news networks or newspapers, create something not true about or example a film superstar to increase their publication rate and their sells. For example, last year I saw a picture on a news website about a woman actor, that she present in a very bad condition at a not suitable party. But, after a week I saw that the television transmit a program about this news and they show that this detail was completely false.
Finally, most of the famous people are upset that people want to take photographs with them everywhere and every time. For example, when an actor wants to has dinner with his family a lot of people that present in the restaurant wants to take a signature from him and it creates difficulty for his family.
On the basis of reasons that mentioned above, I am convinced that the famous people deserve to have more privacy than they have now. Because all people have this deserve for a calm and happy life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 492, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had'?
Suggestion: had
...s idea that the famous people should be have more privacy than they have todays. ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 21, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the people') or simply say ''some people''.
Suggestion: some of the people; some people
...hey have todays. First and foremost, some of people thinks that they have this allow that s...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 313, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...personal and privacy life. For example, an famous Masii that he is realy famous in...
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Line 5, column 371, Rule ID: FEMALE_ACTOR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'actress'?
Suggestion: actress
...saw a picture in a news website about a woman actor, that she present in a very dad conditi...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 538, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'show'
Suggestion: show
...smit a program about this news and they shows that this details was completely false....
^^^^^
Line 7, column 160, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'have'.
Suggestion: have
...ime. For example, when an actor want to has dinner with his family a lot of people ...
^^^
Line 7, column 272, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'creates'?
Suggestion: creates
... want to take signiture from him and it create difficulty for his family. On the ba...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, so, still, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86449864499 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42401888177 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50135501355 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7254481552 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.588235294 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7058823529 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11764705882 5.45110844103 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178330636848 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759995653172 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101173124719 0.0737576698707 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131324771147 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106605425154 0.0645574589148 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.