TPO 39 Independent task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure successful future Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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TPO 39 - Independent task

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In this sophisticated and progressive world, getting a decent job in our chosen field is definitely important to us. The controversial question that arises in this regard is that whether identifying a secure and successful career in today's world is more difficult in comparison to the past or not. While some people are inclined towards the idea that finding a proper and secure job is getting harder these days, others are against this idea. As far as I am concerned, I am of the opinion that nowadays, people can find a decent career with a secure and successful future more easily compared with the past. In the following paragraph, I will delve into some reasons justifying my point of view.
The first noteworthy reason coming to my mind is that having access to a plethora of reliable resources makes it easy for people to know themselves better, resulting in finding jobs according to their talent and interest. There is a wide range of psychological books and TV programs that have allocated to increase people knowledge about their personalities and realizing their strengths and weakness which are very important factors when people choosing a job. If people get a job just to get a livelihood without considering their wants and gifts, it is more likely they lose their job in the near future. While in the past this advantage was not accessible for people. For instance, with studying and participating in many workshops I realized as a controverted girl I need a job like being a writer which is fit my personality to become successful in my career.
Another exquisite point to be mentioned is that in the modern world people are surrounded by a variety and countless job opportunities. Thus, everyone regardless of their educational qualities, and other backgrounds can take on a job somewhere. If you check the Internet every day, a great number of ads have been advertised on thousands of websites for job opening positions, consequently, it can increase the chance of finding a job for job seekers to find a permanent job that leads to a successful career. For example, my brother is very curious about experiencing different fields, every time he loses his job, he can find a better or the same level job in no time.
To summarize, from what has been discussed above, in today's world people can broaden their scope of knowledge about themselves which a gateway to find a job in accordance with their talent and interest. In addition, they have access to unlimited job opportunities which enhance their chance to get a job somewhere.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to field'
Suggestion: to field
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2120.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 434.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88479262673 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.882800655 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518433179724 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 675.9 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.1312063416 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.5 100.406767564 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.125 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159868352678 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059832649206 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389128205554 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104295878196 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376562907881 0.0645574589148 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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