I agree with the statement that it is easier to identify what type of career would lead to success in the past because there are not many jobs in the past. People used to believe that working in the office is surely better than working outdoor, which is no longer true nowadays.
In the past, people who have received higher education is limited. As long as you received higher education in college, you can be a white collar and works in an office. This kind of career will lead to success because a college degree is your biggest advantage over other people. However, today there are so many people in the job market owning a college degree or even higher degrees. Working in an office doesn't necessarily mean that you will have a high salary and an easy life.
What's more, people show more respect for hand work now. In the past, parents encouraged their children to work harder on their study to become so-called brain workers. But as more students have become brain workers, being a brain worker no longer means a bright future. Stories like working late all night in the office are quite prevalent these days. Compared with brain workers, those who work on their hands also have a hard time at work, but they earn more.
The job market is also changing more rapidly due to tech-blooming. In the past few years, the careers related to electricity have a promising future because electricity is a new energy, After a few short years, the careers related to computer science are at their prime because everyone says that computers are the revolutionary power. No one knows which career will be the shining star in the near future.
In a nutshell, the development of higher education, the rise of blue-collar and the unpredictable job market makes it hard for us to identify which career will lead to a promising future. But if you work hard to equip yourself with knowledge and skills, you are sure to be valued by the job market.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68513119534 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38082306624 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527696793003 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1106043105 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5294117647 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1764705882 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.05882352941 5.45110844103 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192887907398 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689781717806 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10428365906 0.0737576698707 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129030362858 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0868440602101 0.0645574589148 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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