In this day and age of modernization, as it is commonly sensed, education plays a vital role in a person life if he/ she wants to have a successful life. Nowadays, having high records of professional education not only gives you high prestige, but also it ensures having a good position in your dream career. The question of whether teachers were more valuable for people in the past has generated a great deal of debate among people from all walk of life. While people have distinct idea toward this opinion, I personally take side with this view that teachers are being appreciated even more in this modern era. In the following paragraph, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
To commence with, the foremost reason why I am supporting this view is that as I mentioned earlier, todays, world is so competitive and things are getting more and more complicated and professional. In this vein, in order to become a successful person specially in your career, you need to have high marks and a great educational record. This is where the paramount role of a good teacher depicts. Therefore, teachers are being valued even more nowadays. A vivid example can be given to shed light on what has elaborated above. In my country, the entrance exam for universities is very important for people. Parents give so much value to their children's teachers since they have a very vital role in success of their child.
The other exquisite point to be mention here is that in the past, especially in my country and based on what my parents elaborated for me, teachers used to punish student physically which is very criticized in my generation. Therefore, people tend not to like and appreciate their teachers. In contrast, teachers are not allowed to do this now and they are also more enthusiastic. They even spend time learning how to be a good and sufficient teacher. So, it is obvious that they are more valued now.
Another noteworthy point worth mentioning is that teachers are earning a huge amount of money. they have one of the most salaries among different jobs. This solely indicates the worth and impact of teachers within a society.
To recapitulate, taking all aforementioned reasons into account, it can be authentically concluded that from my vantage point, teachers are still valued by society even more since the importance of education role has increased, teachers are getting more professional and they earn a great amount of money.
- Some parent offer their school age children money for each high grade mark they get in school Do you think this is a good idea Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 78
- TPO48 Independent Writing Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Because modern life is very complex it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 66
- Because of climate change more and more land that was once used to grow crops or provide food for animals is turning to dry unusable desert land There are many proposals about how to stop this process known as desertification A number of proposals in 80
- TPO54 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state sponsored Olympic teams Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 43
- TPO54 85
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 310, Rule ID: WHETHER
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
...g a good position in your dream career. The question of whether teachers were more valuable for people ...
Line 7, column 96, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
...ers are earning a huge amount of money. they have one of the most salaries among dif...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, then, therefore, thus, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2047.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90887290168 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7556262987 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525179856115 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 657.9 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.692399677 48.9658058833 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4761904762 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.19047619048 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220877083398 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667801019089 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451055109253 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127208061309 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401077700168 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.