TPO 41 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Teachers are responsible for molding and shaping the minds of our young generation. Some people believed that in the past teachers are more appreciated and valued by the society than they are today. In my humble opinion, I think that teachers are more appreciated and valued by our generation. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, in the past, the education of the teachers are not well diversified and they don't have the necessary experience to teach students, whereas today professors are more knowledgeable and equipped with the proper tools to teach effectively with their students. My personal experience is a compelling example of this, my sophomore professors is very smart and intelligent person, his background and graduate studies comes from prestigious school and he is well qualified to teach. Also, he also continued with his master's degree before staring teaching in school and we are truly lucky to have him in our school. In the past professors are only required to finish their college degree in education and pass the board exam, but in this generation teachers are continuously educating themselves to become better in their profession. Parents seeks this qualification from their children educator because they know that their offspring will gain many knowledge and information from their teachers. This illustrates that our society appreciates and valued the teaching profession today compared in the past.
Secondly, educators always brings out the best in their students. Many people become successful because from the guidance and teachings of their professors. In this era, teachers has many method how to motivate and inspire their pupils to excel and strive in their studies. As a result, our society produced brilliant graduates which will become future businessman, CEO and president of the company. For instance, my friend christian was well taught by his professor in college and he was groomed to be successful in his career. Christian was seen with potential by his professor and motivated him well to study better. After graduation, Christian landed a career in a big company in Makati and started first as assistant editor and later on promoted as Chief Editor in just two years. This moment, Christian is well known in publishing business and he really excelled in his craft. This example shows that teacher are valued by the people in our society because they have the talent to help the students reach their maximum capabilities.
To summarize, I believe that our society today appreciate and value our teachers. This is because they can bring the best talent and capabilities from their students and they are more qualified teachers compared in the past era.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
...chers are not well diversified and they dont have the necessary experience to teach ...
Line 3, column 417, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'studies'' or 'study's'?
Suggestion: studies'; study's
...ent person, his background and graduate studies comes from prestigious school and he is...
Line 3, column 951, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...hey know that their offspring will gain many knowledge and information from their te...
Line 3, column 951, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun knowledge seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much knowledge', 'a good deal of knowledge'.
Suggestion: much knowledge; a good deal of knowledge
...hey know that their offspring will gain many knowledge and information from their teachers. Th...
Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: MANY_NN
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun method seems to be countable; consider using: 'many methods'.
Suggestion: many methods
...r professors. In this era, teachers has many method how to motivate and inspire their pupil...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, as to, for instance, i feel, i think, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2319.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 449.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16481069042 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72799507572 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487750556793 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 705.6 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4179001274 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.428571429 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.380952381 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.19047619048 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161788038081 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621765477729 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740311001128 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137383028489 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613439115593 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.