Teachers are the creator of the nation and they should receive high respect in society. However, these days people have sharp declined in their moral values and they are unable to respect their teachers. Yeas, I agree with the statement that teachers were more respected in past compare these days. I feel this way because of two reasons which will explain in the following essay.
First of all, it is an irrefutable fact that teaching is a most respectful job in any society, their ultimate goal is to spread knowledge and wisdom in the society and create a better nation. Their primary job is to teach in school and colleges, however, these days most of the colleges have an online or distance learning system. In this system, students enrol himself to the college web portal and after that they get online reading materials and in the last students write their online exam. In this system, there is no proper teaching model involved. As a result, students don’t know the value of a teacher. Even they don’t know the hard work of a teacher who prepared their online subject material. My own experience is a compelling example of this. Last year I finished my online diploma in business administration. In this program, there was no teacher involved. Due to this I was unable to understand the value of a teacher and their sacrifices for the society. Therefore, I believe that this might be a potential reason of decline teacher’s respect in society.
Secondly, in the last decade, few teachers are involved in a heinous criminal activity which is not acceptable by any society or any nation. Last year, one teacher was involved in raping of his own students in the USA. In the Maxico, two teachers were arrested in the drug case. In my personal experience, three teachers of my old school were arrested in sex abuse. It was a shocking news for me because these teachers were very respected in my city. In my opinion, this kind of activities is also involved in the decline of respect.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that teachers are the highly respectful personal of the society, but in the current scenario as a society, we are unable to understand the importance of a teacher. However, some teachers are also involved in some disrespectful job, which is also a reason of disrespect.
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...hool were arrested in sex abuse. It was a shocking news for me because these teachers were very...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82367758186 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67494912166 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47355163728 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.0 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7430511779 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2608695652 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2608695652 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91304347826 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150103275084 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504719345032 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465614080963 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103793767298 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486799335332 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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