In my view, the students are the most important group in each society because they will form the future of the world. However, some people think that the valuability of the teachers are becoming less than in the past. I disagree with this opinion and think that the teacher's job is more difficult than past, hence each society should respect the teachers more than the past. I will elaborate my opinion on the following reasons.
First and foremost, if a country wants to proceed and become industrialized in the future, it should invest a lot of physical and moral things in the teachers. Because the teachers are the important persons that can affect the students to love their country and being a useful person for that. The valuability of teachers now is revealed more than before; hence, many societies extremely value and appreciate the teachers. For instance, in my country, people specified a special day as the teacher day to appreciate them.
Furthermore, many parents believe that if their children have a suitable graduation, they will have a prosperous future; hence, they value the teacher more than before. Many years ago, people do not like teachers because they bother students at school and usually were serious and angry persons, however today the teachers have psychology knowledge about children and behave correctly with them. Hence, people now love them; for instance, in my country, people have a close relationship with the teacher of their children and are ready to pay a lot of money to them.
Admittedly, the growth of the science and technology is quicker than before hence, teachers should have a lot of knowledge for answering the student's questions. However, in the past decades, the teachers did not need to study new explorations of science and just train the students by old sciences. Therefore, the teacher's job is more valuable than before; parents usually are disabled to answer all of the children's questions, hence they are thankful to the teachers for training their children.
All in all, in my opinion, the value of the teaching job now is more than before because the teachers are more knowledgeable than before and each society needs the teachers to have a prosperous future. I recommend all the people to be thankful for the teacher and value them more than before.
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- TPO-42 - Independent Writing Task Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- TPO-47 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. 60
- TPO-42 - Integrated Writing Task Glass is a favored building material for modern architecture, yet it is also very dangerous for wild birds. Because they often cannot distinguish between glass and open air, millions of birds are harmed every year when the 61
- TPO-49 - Integrated Writing Task Like many creatures, humpback whales migrate long distances for feeding and mating purposes. How animals manage to migrate long distances is often puzzling. In the case of humpback whales, we may have found the answer: the 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 397, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... parents usually are disabled to answer all of the childrens questions, hence they are tha...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1936.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98969072165 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58213982237 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.430412371134 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 592.2 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1184485221 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235992069012 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094120546363 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639006477629 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15294896872 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382882851556 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.