TPO 41.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
"Teachers are prophets," A famous quote in my culture. It's crystal clear that a magnificent amount of what we have learned is owing to our teachers and professors. Some people believe that in modern times the teachers are underrated, while others conduct with this point of view. Although ideas on this specific issue are divided; In my view, teachers are being more appreciated than past times. The reasons why I think so are manifold, however, two of which has great priority, are described hereunder.
First and foremost, by developing, media and social networks, the rule of teachers are being more illustrated to the people. People become more aware through these medias and know how the staple the work of teachers are in educating their children. For instance, through social networks, namely Facebook, Telegram the importance of their job widespread. A wise man is needed, to share the evidence that how significant it is to have your child a proper teacher and how teacher's job is critical in the education of your child. Merely, by only wide spreading this news and information, people are willing to have the greatest respect for the teachers, to encourage them for sharing more knowledge with their children.
Secondary, the more the level of prosperity in people's living conditions improved, the more people care about education. For instance, my mother was a teacher, for approximately thirty years, owing to terrible circumstances of 15 years ago, she had a low revenue, and the lack of money plus long hours of working and educating children made her timid. Hence, she couldn't bring out her best through her job. But, as my country economic and culture developed during the last couple of years there wasn't such a problem anymore. and teachers work-time hours reduced. Moreover, their income has raised up. and the level of education has also stemmed. As can be influenced from above, by considerating he marvelous effect of teachers in juveniles life and education, government and people learned to pay more attention to teachers.
To sum up, if a country wants a great society, it's government should pay more attention to the teachers. Owing to the reasons above, you can't find a country that hasn't find this crucial factor. Thereby, teachers are more appreciated and acclaimed nowadays.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, while, for instance, i think, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1943.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11315789474 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76640285652 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1476730831 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5238095238 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0952380952 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144656917587 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445210236091 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505929654572 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950867275738 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301023748769 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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