tpo 42. Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
There are various job positions each of which need special abilities and talents. In some jobs, workes just to one task every day, while in other positions, they are supposed to do different activities during the workday. Now, there is a controversy about the situation that workers are more satisfied with, doing one specific task or different tasks. In my way of thinking, the employes are more satisfied doing various activities during the workday.
The first reason which should be stated here is that it is less boring for workers when they do different tasks. When they just do one particular work, after a while, it will annoy them. However, doing different tasks will not be repetitive for them and they can enjoy the day long better.
The other point which deserves some words here is that by doing various task, the workers can learn more. Each activity increases one aspect of the worker's ability, so more various tasks mean more enhancement in abilities. When a worker feels that he is using his time efficiency, he will be more satisfied with his job. In contrast, doing one activity will not result in increasing of the capability.
To summarize, it is better for workers to do various activities during the workday because it would be less boring for them, and it can enhance their capability.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 149, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'workers'' or 'worker's'?
Suggestion: workers'; worker's
...ch activity increases one aspect of the workers ability, so more various tasks mean mor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 52.1666666667 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1094.0 1977.66487455 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 224.0 407.700716846 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88392857143 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47266626213 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 212.727598566 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522321428571 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 618.680645161 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.6232726411 48.9658058833 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.1666666667 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396677418801 0.236089414692 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16268106399 0.076458572812 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792889248108 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250076611187 0.150856017488 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0970052144859 0.0645574589148 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 86.8835125448 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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