tpo-44
Even though our world is developing at a faster rate parents have little time to spend with their children due to their tight work schedule. Personally, I believe that interacting with kids with some games and sports activities is favoured way to spend time with kids.I feel this way for two reasons,which I will elucidate in the following paragraph.
Firstly, recreational activities will innervate a child’s overall development. In this era of tension causing world young children will be more happy to spend time with their parents rather than learning with them. For instance, when parents play a game with their child they are enthusiastic and more energetic. Likewise, many of the kids enjoy the time spent with their parents laughing and making jokes with them instead of completing a school homework material. Although, helping an assignment will benefit the child yet, it is the fun related activities that the child will remember enjoyed with their guardians.
Secondly, parents can teach while playing with their kids many values and mannerisms. Elders can teach their children honesty , sharing and caring behaviour. For example, when a parent plays with their child and friends he can teach their offspring to be truthful with others and be honest always . Moreover, qualities like the aforesaid if inculcated in the young minds at an earlier age will remain with him till his death. Storytelling by parents to their child is another way by which the child will be amused and entertained. Undoubtedly, he will enjoy each and every moment with their guardians.
To conclude, I believe that it is better to allocate the time with their children by involving in sports and fun activities rather than doing their school work. This is because, it is easier to make child learn moral values through games and it helps in their cognitive development too.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Even though our world is developing at a faster rat...
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Line 1, column 269, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...is favoured way to spend time with kids.I feel this way for two reasons,which I w...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...ith kids.I feel this way for two reasons,which I will elucidate in the following parag...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... Elders can teach their children honesty , sharing and caring behaviour. For examp...
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...o be truthful with others and be honest always . Moreover, qualities like the aforesai...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ruthful with others and be honest always . Moreover, qualities like the aforesaid ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, likewise, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16993464052 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63238415991 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535947712418 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.164857953 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.466666667 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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