Tpo 44
Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Other believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to schoolwork, which of the two approaches do you prefer?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is no doubt nowadays, interaction of parents even those do not have a lot of time to spend with their children play the key role in children's lives. No one can deny the effect of parents on children's daily lives. A controversial question which is often raised regarding this issue that what is the best way to spend the time that parents be with their children. Some people hold this viewpoint which is better to parents use the time to have fun playing games or sport, however, some others make take an opposite viewpoint and believe that it is better to use that time doing things related to schoolwork. From my own perspective, the second belief is true. In the following paragraphs I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
First of all, one should take into account this significant fact that helping children with their homework will greatly improve their learning efficiency. Furthermore, it can help them learn new things in easier and also faster way. To illustrate the concept, take for example the child who has an assignment in math. When his parents help her to solve the problem, not only it is simpler for children but it also required less time. Needless to say by the time that is saved the child can go to museums and park another enjoyable place.
In approaching this issue, apart from the fact mentioned above, one should regard another subtle point that spending time together to do things related to schoolworks will enhance affection in the family. As a matter of fact, this will reduce misunderstanding and also remove gaps between children and their parents. To demonstrate, researcher established and experimental program to estimate the impact of parents helping homework on children behavior's toward their parents. The results are surprising: over 75 percent of the answer was positive. this clarifies the fact that how is beneficial if parents help their children do their homework.
undoubtly, playing video game with children's's have some potential benefit. it can help them have a positive attitude to life, consequently, they have less stress in their lives.
actually there are some other reasons and examples, supporting this claim, which are not mentioned above, All in all assistance of parents with children schoolwork, not only help them learn things better and more efficient way but also get family bond tighter. in other words, it is really essential that parents help their children with their homework.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, really, regarding, second, so, apart from, for example, no doubt, as a matter of fact, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2053.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0318627451 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62199348157 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526960784314 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5458730058 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.65 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15 5.45110844103 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385181351322 0.236089414692 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105227063854 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10158364947 0.0737576698707 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205877533415 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129935867781 0.0645574589148 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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