TPO 45- In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives
Lifetime is a scene of our choice. Making decision is a personal and determining responsibility which will impact greatly on further activities. While some peoples hold this opinion that youngs still depend on their parents for making such decisions, I believe that they mostly undertake this matter individually these days. Following reasons elaborates my viewpoint.
First and foremost, younger population benefit from more education comparing to old generation; which is expected to assist them in responsibilities like as making decisions. It is widely accepted that, growing in a more educated environment and intracting with experts and experienced staff of schools might lead the youth to decide logical and wisely in the future. As an opportunity, for example, having accessibility to consulting centers rather than before decaeds, probably affects on quality of their choices. Other recorces such as tv programs, books, and communities; also, could be another a supportive mean for young peoples which are deprived from advices of their busy parents.
Second, due to sensitive personality of youth; they prefer to decide and act independently regardless of its result. In other words, young peoples highly desire to experience new things and no matter how difficult or acceptable is this. Similarly, it is natural for them to make decisions that are both adventuresome and somehow non-rational. It is why actuate them to do freely.
Finally, being young interwoven with some skills such as curiosity so that prob and ask more. As a result, it is likely to cause being good analyser and thinker. This power, as psychologists asserts, posses the same contributor in making decisions. Thus, it could be said that youth period itself is a factor enabling humankinds to decide and then perform better.
In sum, being young illustrate more ability of make decistion comparing to past, because of having attributes like as curiosity and thinking power. Moreover, thanks to learning chances as well as information sources and friend networks it is reasonable to decide better among youth.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: LEARN_NNNNS_ON_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to'?
Suggestion: to
...r. Moreover, thanks to learning chances as well as information sources and friend ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, moreover, second, similarly, so, still, then, thus, well, while, for example, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1768.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39024390244 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93504309837 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643292682927 0.524837075471 123% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8758682995 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2222222222 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72222222222 5.45110844103 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270803188274 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675478925715 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665990251891 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143458628144 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590777861385 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.01818996416 122% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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