TPO-45
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The argument claimed that today’s teens should gain the ability of decision-making in their lives rather than over-depended on their parents in the past. Benefiting from the development of ideology in modern society, “personal independence" is the central motif today. In 2017, the University of Cambridge surveyed 1,000 teenagers. It merely had a question: “Do you agree that developing independence is critical to your growth?” Over 75% of those people think well of this question. According to this investigation, even young people themselves believe that standing on their legs is beneficial as well. Independent decision-making has significant profits for young people in all aspects of their growth.
To begin with, making an independent decision could boost youths’ confidence so that children could be more confident to handle issues in their lives. It would help them to have the nerve to take adventures and gain unique experience without waiting for any support or permission from parents to take action and do things. When young people full of confidence make an independent decision, they would learn to take responsibility for their lives, like face stress, solve problems, seek earnings, and so on, both of them would build up the knowledge of them dealing with the unpredictable future.
Furthermore, independent decision-making would develop their personality. As much logic as individuals put into their decisions, their character would affect the way they make a choice; otherwise, it emerges during youth and evolves over their lifetime. Thus, the capacity of decision-making is like a double-edged sword; it does not merely influence people's childhood and penetrates all aspects of their adulthood as well, like their social life, financial arrangement, and so on.
Nevertheless, throughout the last few decades, most children have been overprotected by their parents. All this may create an over-spoiled image of a young person, which might cause some terrible things to happen. If a young person without the capabilities of decision-making themselves, no one can help them away from complicated situations, when they grow into adulthood.
Now, after analyzing various factors, I approve of the thought that youths should have the ability to deal with their lives nor over-rely upon their parents.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 483, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...life, financial arrangement, and so on. Additionally, throughout a few decades, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, so, thus, well, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1990.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57422969188 4.8611393121 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24574324829 2.67179642975 121% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613445378151 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9394922884 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.375 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3125 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358916680613 0.236089414692 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123020237245 0.076458572812 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838035386189 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188743161448 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690305077013 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 11.7677419355 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 10.9000537634 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.