Nowadays, due to the rise of advanced technologies, people are more exposed to news and they often hear about events happening around the world more and more. The important question that arises regarding this issue is should people care about news or not. From my perspective, news can be more important than people think and it is better for people to be aware of their environments. In the following lines, I will elaborate on the most outstanding reasons.
First and foremost, news often affects our decisions. Indeed, the news may not affect our daily lives; but, we can change some of our decisions based on the events occur around us. For instance, I remember my sister has decided to migrate 10 years ago and she needed dollars for her migration. That time our politics men had established new political relations with other counties; that caused the cost of a dollar became fluctuated and it increased dramatically. After this occurrence, My sister decided to change her flight time and she rescheduled it to one month later; because she could not afford the cost of dollars.
Secondly, news and events can change our minds and broaden our perspective. When a person has a lot of information about different fields such as science, technology, politics or so on can better analyze the situation and behave rationally in his/her life. For example, my father always pursues news about different fields; because he believes that news has made his mind different in every range of his life. He can analyze the political issues very well and his predictions always come true; because he gains information about political issues by hearing news every day. He always tells me the more you listen to the news, the more you broaden your perspective on different issues.
To put it briefly, based on the reasons I mentioned above, not only can news give us more information about surrounding and open our minds but also news can affect our daily or long term people decisions. Therefore, I recommend everyone to pay attention to news daily.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, first, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93623188406 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63127746314 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55652173913 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0149122457 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.4375 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5625 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120784929496 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043935191168 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357388043202 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0742286939256 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031743564828 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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