Maintaining friendship is a very crucial part of human lives. There is no doubt in my mind that having a small group of friend for a long time is very significant to make our life easy: after all, few friends are easy to handle. However, The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is important for a happy life or ability to make many new friends? Some people believe that having few friends is an important factor for having a happy life. On the other hand, I think having an ability to make new friends makes a person really happy. I feel this way for following reasons, which I will explain in the following essay.
To begin with, having the same set of friends for a long time makes our life boring and monotonous, by interacting with a same old friend it feels like you don't have anything new to talk and soon we get tired of from our friends. My own example demonstrates this concept. When I was in school 10 years back, I had only two friends, I spent the whole of my school time with just two friends, and as a result, I never get an opportunity to interact with any new people in school and make friends. I believe by making new friends you also learn new things and that broadens your horizon. As I said, I had only two friends in school, so I never got to learn about new people, their beliefs, and their culture. Therefore, my social circle never expanded much in the school. Whereas, when I joined the two years back university, I decided I will make new friends, and I did and then I realized I have better experiences and my knowledge diversified. This example clearly illustrates that making new friends provide you an opportunity to know about many people and that is very important part of human lives.
Furthermore, many experts argue that a person's ability to make new friends provides them with a successful life. For instance, when I was a University student, I made many friends and some of them really proved to be helpful when I entered the workforce. My friends who were already placed in a top firm recommended me for a job position, and I was able to be hired with a top IT company when I started looking for a job. In addition to it, my supervisor quickly noticed that I am a friendly person and he assigned me a marketing project which required people pleasing skills. I was lauded for my ability to make friends easily as this attribute helped me to get profitable businesses to the company. I was quickly advanced to my career. This example states how important it is to have many friends for your successful career. If I just had few friends I would not have gained the success so quickly.
All in all, quality to make new friends is a very significant attribute for a person. This is because it not only makes your life interesting but also you build networks which help you in your professional growth.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...he ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is im...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...th a small number of people over a long period of time is important for a happy life or abilit...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ith a same old friend it feels like you dont have anything new to talk and soon we g...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... Furthermore, many experts argue that a persons ability to make new friends provides th...
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Line 5, column 381, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
...nd I was able to be hired with a top IT company when I started looking for a job. In ad...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...any friends for your successful career. If I just had few friends I would not have...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, really, so, then, therefore, whereas, after all, for instance, i feel, i think, in addition, no doubt, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 75.0 43.0788530466 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2370.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 529.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48015122873 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79583152331 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55492234498 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.444234404537 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 746.1 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3606360022 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.75 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0416666667 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.95833333333 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340236580849 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109931292653 0.076458572812 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121334966968 0.0737576698707 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222660267876 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111099170806 0.0645574589148 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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