TPO 52Do you agree or disagree?The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
Throughout history, rules and regulations have played a pivotal role in all societies. Rules indicate that how much a society is successful. This matter that whether rules are very strict for youth or not is a controversial issue between people. A majority of people think that young people were more free in the past, and it is hard for young people to adhere the today's strict rules. I disagree with this idea for two main reasons. I will explain my viewpoint in the following essay.
The first noteworthy regarding this issue is that in such a sophisticated world where we are living, some regulation had better exist. Today, as can be felt easily, the style of living has evolved. There are many cutting-edge devices that come to our aid. If there are not some rules, they will destroy their life. For example, there are many high-speed cars and young people tend to try these cars. If there is not any rule to control these high-speed cars, young people may lose their life. Therefore, these rules are very practical in today world.
More importantly, it is axiomatic that today, young people are very clever. It is easy for them to follow these regulations. For instance, my brother can understand and obey the rules more than me, because when I was young, I was very rebellious and I think every person should obey me. I was not familiar with the consequences of crimes and it was very hard for me to follow the rules. because of the development of technology and the Internet, these rules are not very strict for young people. They can accept these regulations logically.
All in all, by considering the mentioned reasons above, I think today rules are not very strict for young people. It is owing to the fact that these rules are very practical especially in today advanced world, and nowadays, youth are very rational.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 387, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...s very hard for me to follow the rules. because of the development of technology and th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75235109718 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52217297421 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504702194357 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4991373253 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.1904761905 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1904761905 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.19047619048 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254538790133 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790828210296 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598625168061 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169927949163 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534531666539 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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