Regarding the living in modern area that provides people to have a hechtich daily lifstyle, government should provide better environment to relaes the estrees s and highly tention of the peoples. In other words, by providing the healthy environment the politician can help humans to meke happier life. Despite the fact that the effects of inventing artistic environmet cannot be neglected to make people happier, it is my firm conviction that investing on athletic points are more prominent to creat people more healthy. In what follows, I will elaborate on my perspective.
The first vital point to bear in mind is that proliferation of excercise and encouraging people throgh doing different sport will make them a well-time to change their lifstyles and care more abouth their health. In fact, due to daily hectich lifstyle that people are envolving with, there is no enogh time to have an exercise. However, If the government spend money to invent new opportunity and impulsive people to engae more with sport, they will become more healthy.
Take my personal experience as a compelling example. I was working in a big company for a significants amounts of hours that makes me lots of physical problems. by pathing through that hectic days our company had decided to bring about a gym for employee which was siginficantly effect on our efficiency directly. This example clearly illustrates that, If the adminestrative of our company hadn't been brought the sport environment for the employee, the efficency of worker would have been reduce over the passing time.
Another important reason that would distinct the effectivness of spending money on athletics emerge on children’s future. As the children need to grow in a exciting society which is help them to become more calm and mitigate the pausity of tention on their daily days, it will soposed government to fund strenthly the workout worlds by taking and spending more money on them. Although, arts have especial benefits on childerens future's life, atlethic known as indispenseble for evry kind of kids. The resect study about the effectivness of excersice on children rather than art represents that students who spend most of their time with sport make their future secure by making their sprite calm and activate their mind by evolving with daily workout.
In conclusion, I totally agree that the government better to spend more money on ecersice rather than art. It not only does release people’s stress, but also help children’s to make their future lifestyle more secure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, regarding, so, well, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2135.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14457831325 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71718134591 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575903614458 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 660.6 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4042140952 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.588235294 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4117647059 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136121557919 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465896525043 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553959050271 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0822664011277 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486326430404 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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