TPO 6 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
When I was in history class, I imagined what would it be like living in Taiwan 100 years ago. My grandparents enjoyed telling me story about their childhood. I listened to the stories with surprised, and I agree that life today is easier and more comfortable than before.
First of all, the living facilities now are way more advanced than in my grandparents generation. It is undoubtedly that people’s daily necessities are improving with technologies development. The convenience of our life will only getting better as time goes on. To take my grandparents as an example. During my grandparents childhood, they have never seen flush toilets. They told me stories about going to toilets at night outside their house. It not only smelt bad but also felt inconvenient. Besides, there were no cushion beds and air conditions. It is conceivable that the bed time was not as comfortable as I have now.
Secondly, during my grandparents childhood, Taiwan was not as peace as now. Taiwan's populations comprise of native people and immigrants from China. At that time, Chinese people immigrated to Taiwan in search of a better life. As the result, people in Taiwan were in an upheaval condition. Native people and Chinese people were facing difficulties sharing land and water. Chinese people were also segregated by different culture, that is to say, fightings were happened normally. To take my grandparents as an example, they are immigrants so they experienced discrimination by native people. Besides, they were, like other people, in charge of doing manual work with low salaries. It was very difficult for them to raise children.
Admittedly, there were fewer people in the past, so citizens lived in a place with little pollution. In the past, there were easy to see fish in the drains and birds in the sky. They had cleaner water and air compare to now. However, the technologies can help people to solve those problems now. We can easily install air purifiers and water filters and live in a comfort life.
To sum up, life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when my grandparents were children because the society is more stable and living facilities have improved.
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...ot as peace as now. Taiwans populations comprise of native people and immigrants from China...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, first of all, to sum up, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1831.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00273224044 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82571391719 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532786885246 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4383746535 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.8148148148 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5555555556 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.74074074074 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280123725399 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719919909443 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902117394981 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195721143992 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112300439847 0.0645574589148 174% => OK
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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