The debate among the young generation of today's world is on the contingent to be successful by different skills or single skill only. Although an individual can concentrate more on acquiring single skill, in my opinion, development of many skills is the prime important to be successful in today's digital and competitive world. The reasons on supporting the development of different skills are illustrated below.
First of all, development of many distinctive skills within a person can enable him to apply for plenty of jobs whereas the single single would shrink his or her choice to apply since he has to submit his CV on particular field at which he is expert enough. If a single skill person can get the opportunity to apply in a job where multiple skills persons are also applied, the multiple skills person would success most of the time. As a results, the probability of getting job for the person of multiple skills is much more higher than the single skiller. For example, I am expert on physics, mathematics and computer language. On the other hand, my friend had a phd on physics. We both applied for a manager post in a reputed multinational company. In the viva-board, the expertise members of the viva board selects me as they need a person who has multiple skills for the manager post yet the PhD of my friend does not fulfill the requirement for the post.
Secondly,there is no alternative to learn multiple skills in order to be successful in the carrier. While performing the job, I need to complete a numerous workshops on sociology, economics and even politics. These courses and my previous knowledge have enriched my skills which are very effective in performing every task of my job. Take an example of my project on reducing the child marrige in society where my skills on statistics helped to select the most desire area for this task, knowledge on sociology were used in communicating with the local people, and my mathematical background was supportive to form a model about how to reduce the child marriage and dealing with the factors.
Above all, multiple skills is necessary not only to get a suitable job in the competitive markets but also to be successful in performing the jobs while single skill would not be as effective as multiple s
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: single
...to apply for plenty of jobs whereas the single single would shrink his or her choice to apply...
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Line 2, column 386, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'skills'' or 'skill's'?
Suggestion: skills'; skill's
... persons are also applied, the multiple skills person would success most of the time. ...
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Line 2, column 435, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a result' or simply 'results'?
Suggestion: a result; results
...rson would success most of the time. As a results, the probability of getting job for the...
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Line 2, column 519, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'higher' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: higher
...r the person of multiple skills is much more higher than the single skiller. For example, I...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n the other hand, my friend had a phd on physics. We both applied for a manager p...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f the viva board selects me as they need a person who has multiple skills for the...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
... the requirement for the post. Secondly,there is no alternative to learn multiple ski...
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Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'workshop'?
Suggestion: workshop
... the job, I need to complete a numerous workshops on sociology, economics and even politi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, as to, for example, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82097186701 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81175265557 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506393861893 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.0148875037 48.9658058833 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.666666667 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0666666667 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 5.45110844103 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198896655055 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782568106691 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675971346623 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134974381847 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603242881859 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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