TPO14
People benefit more from traveling in their own country than foreign country.
traveling, is an opportunity to escape from the daily routine and open more fields in our lives. it's a passion that revives us and gives us more energy.
However, there is a crucial debate around the recommanded type of travelling.
Some people encourage the foreign traveling and consider that it is more beneficial than the local traveling. others, might think that the traveling inside the country is more important. For me, I firmly adopt the former viewpoint for reasons that I will explain in the following essay.
To begin with, heading to a new country opens the opportunity to discover new cultures and traditions as we can experience their way of life for a period of time.
From my personal experience, I traveled to London last summer and it was an unforgettable trip. I enjoyed discvering monuments which I used to see through Tv or internet. also, it was a pleasure for me to know about their way of life by getting in touch with some english people who guided me to lovely places and recommanded tasty food for me. Even now, I am still talking to them by phone.
This clearly indicates that traveling abroad helps us enlarge our knowledge and discover other societies.
Another major point is that traveling far away from home is an opportunity to discover yourself. it helps us escape from the comfort zone.
For instance, I lived quite a year in France. In the beginning, I used to feel lonely and sad since I miss my usual life. Nervertheless, by time, I started discovering new things and passions. For example, we had theater in the neighborhood so I gave it a try and since that time I always practice acting and dream to pursue my carreer in this field. Therefore traveling, could help us discover hidden parts of ourselves and shape or thinking.
In a nutshell, traveling abroad is of a high importance. it helps us discover not only new cultures and traditions but also ourselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78012048193 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75605372293 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578313253012 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1733041967 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5714285714 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8095238095 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09523809524 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.53405017921 198% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193837899097 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524434970369 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720120983326 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0782034340186 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753849515075 0.0645574589148 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.