Tpo23-people believe that it would be better to work quickly and carelessly
Over the past few decades, it has become difficult for people to find field related work based on their education. There are so many students who have completed higher graduation and looking for the field related job. It is hard to find a job because of high competitions. Some argue that by doing work quickly, employees have more time to deal with other projects. While others hold the different idea that every work is required an accuracy. From my perspective, the latter view carries more weight. I take the position on account for the following reasons.
Primarily, accuracy is the paramount factor in the workplace. However, some employees may not work accurately in order to finish their task quickly. For example, when in a company, all the employees are asked to complete a group task. Some employees would work on the task accurately so they would not make any errors in the given work. On the other hand, other employees would prefer to work quickly so they can finish it early compared to the other employees in order to make a good impression in front of the boss and get a promotion. However, there are chances that they might have done enormous mistakes, and they did not realize those because they wanted to finish it early. In such cases, the employee may lose the job because he has done a big mistake in the given assignment.
Furthermore, making a mistake in order to finish a task fast might have some serious consequences which the company and the other people would need to suffer in the future. Additionally, a person may not get a second chance to improve the mistake at the work. To elaborate this more, in my town, one construction company started a project to build a multi-story building. The employees were forced to build a whole building in a short period of time, and because of that, they did not work accurately on every aspect while constructing that building. As a result, the whole building was fallen down within three months, and many people were killed in that incident. Hence, it would have not happened if they have utilized more time and carefully built that building.
Admittedly, with the growing competitions among the employees at the workplace, it would become necessary that employees work at a faster pace. Hence, they would compete with their co-workers, and also it will help them to secure their job in the future. Nowadays, many employees prefer to work for long hours so they can have more time to finish the task which would help them to avoid making any mistakes in the work.
All in all, I strongly believe that quality and accuracy is more important than high productivity. Hence, it is important to correctly without making mistakes though it would take little more time to finish it. This is because quality work would never create any problem and some mistakes cannot be recovered in any situation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 367, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... more time to deal with other projects. While others hold the different idea that eve...
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Line 2, column 222, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ll the employees are asked to complete a group task. Some employees would work on...
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Line 3, column 435, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ed to build a whole building in a short period of time, and because of that, they did not work...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, may, second, so, while, for example, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2374.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 495.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79595959596 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71684168287 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52826809844 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458585858586 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 748.8 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3980665893 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3076923077 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0384615385 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178354841166 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492404579591 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048106737616 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106816275215 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201768892445 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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