In the modern era, as it is commonly sensed, relations between people specially those which are between parents has changed significantly. In this vein, while some people contend that families are still the same as they were in the past, in my point of view, young people in a family are not anymore depended to their parents as they were before. Throughout the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most predominant and outstanding reasons.
To commence with, the first exquisite point which should be mentioned here is the fact that in the past, the careers were followed from one generation to the next one. To put it more simply, families tend to live with each other due to fact that they need to rely on each other to make money of their career. for example, in the past, since there was not industrial evolution and many people were still living in villages, a whole family members were needed to manage a farm land and things like that. In contrast, nowadays, thanks to development of technology, people lives in town and everybody can have his own job.
The other important point worth mentioning is that because of advancement of technology and internet people get familiar with other cultures and they tend to travel around the world in order to follow their dreams. Therefore, youngsters are willing to leave their parents and get in depended. A vivid example can be given to shed light on what has elaborated earlier. Here, I myself can be considered as good example of this. I am really enthusiastic to travel abroad and experience studying in another country which means I should leave my parents and live by my own.
Another equally noteworthy point in considering this issue is that in this day and age of modernization, awareness of young people has increased. They no longer need to depend on their parents to know about the ways of having a good life. By the way of example, many of my friends have left their parents’ home and now they are living separately since they can find a job that affords their living expenses.
To recapitulate, taking all aforementioned reasons into account, it could be authentically concluded that from my vantage point, today young people are better at making decisions independently since the improvement of societies, specially economically has brought more wealth that young people can live alone and independent and also by the spread of internet using, young members in a family are more mature than in the past.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, really, so, still, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, in contrast, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2068.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 423.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88888888889 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66356726812 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527186761229 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.9932800511 48.9658058833 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.25 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4375 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324450313346 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901427412347 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692377159497 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17938359216 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052246276826 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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