Tpo48/ do agree or disagree that modern life is a complex so the young people should have the ability to put a plan and to be organize.
The world is changing dramatically nowadays, all this new discoveries and and technology adds a huge impact to youngsters life. This change requires young people to be more organized while they are preparing for their future. Personally, I agree that children should but a good plan for their life before doing anything, I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, people who are plan to their goals can achieve their goals fasters and getting better results than people who do not making any plan for their inspirations. Moreover, people who are orgnized are less suffer from complication that could come with any business or new work.. My own experience is a compelling example for this. Two years ago. I decided to start new software firm, I but great plan for every things that may I need, from A to Z, first I started with how much could this business cost me, and how many emplyees I would need, moreover, I cheched the taxes and the place that I have to rant. All that help my business to become successful.. If I had not but plan and orgnized every thing, I would never reach that success that I reach it.
Secondly, people who do not making any plan and working randomly, they would suffer from consequences that could happen in the long run. While people who are making plan and working on develop these plan and predict what might happen, they can lead prosperious life. For example, my brother is one of the people who never care about future and lives his day by day with no clear plan, he goes and back from his work, he is doing same job for ten years now. I never heard him says that he will plan to develop his work or do his own business in future. However, he is a good employee and very diligent, but he is the kind that try to make any chance in his life to increase his income, or put a plan for two or five years from now. My brother would never put goal to himself and try to reach it, which thing has ngative effect on his progress..If my brother had made a goal and tried to reach it, he would become more successful and might be have his own business instead of working as employee with limited salary every month.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that young people should but plan for their future can offset with the modern life that we live now. this because people who making plan for their goals they can reach their goal faster and they can live prosperious life, and because youngsters who do not organize and live with no plan they live limited and less achieveable life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 9.8082437276 224% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 28.0 13.8261648746 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 43.0788530466 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2095.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 470.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45744680851 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27086572595 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.442553191489 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 634.5 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.3103329136 48.9658058833 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.388888889 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1111111111 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199037157068 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071226679535 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537694947878 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137512665037 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304847818395 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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