the impact of increase the universities tuition on the students and education.
Education is the most significant part in people life. Education is the priceless opportunity to chance our destiny to guarantee great life. In my opinion, increase the tuition fee in the universities is unfair decision should everyone against it, I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, raising education payment has negative impact on both the students and the universities, this is because this increasing in expenses could have led to decline in students number who would to be enrolled , which could have led to decline in university income . Therefore, this decline in students number would have helped to make students working only with their high school diploma, which makes life less productive and their living in minimum level. My own experience is a compelling example of this. Ten years ago, when I were graduated from high school, then I decided to study medicine. There was a big obstacle in my way, was the tuition fee of the college, which was very high, neither my family nor me could had afforded. As a result, I lost my eager to study anything ales, I work with my diploma a small jobs with small salary barely could cover my needs. If tuition had not been high , might I have became a doctor and that would have change all my present and my future.
Secondly, when this unexcused increase in the universities tuition has happened, not only decrease the students numbers that would have enrolled in the universities but also would decrease the income that would the college or educational institutions could have gotten it, which thing could effect on the universities scholar ship that offered by the college . Moreover, this could effect on the universities budget so they can not cover all the university and students needs from equipments, or other facilities. For example, My brother mentioned that his universities increase the tuition of the biology class to two-time than before, which thing had led tp decline in students number that were interest in studying this subject. Consequently , the university budget had affected as well, that had led to reduce the researches and other facilities that before offered by the university. If the university had not been increased the students tuition, that budget shortage would not have happened.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that increase payment courses has negative effect on both universities and students. This is because the number of students that are interested to enrolled in universities that offer those classes would reduced, and because this increase in tuition would effect on the universities budget as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for example, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2223.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 437.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08695652174 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70954310551 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475972540046 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 702.9 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.513209054 48.9658058833 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.764705882 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7058823529 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.47058823529 5.45110844103 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.5376344086 415% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305628525735 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110206731519 0.076458572812 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101590131955 0.0737576698707 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210657760316 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0867119816356 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 11.7677419355 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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